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        <journal-meta>
            <journal-id journal-id-type="pmc">Gates Open Res</journal-id>
            <journal-title-group>
                <journal-title>Gates Open Research</journal-title>
            </journal-title-group>
            <issn pub-type="epub">2572-4754</issn>
            <publisher>
                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
                <publisher-loc>London, UK</publisher-loc>
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        <article-meta>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/gatesopenres.13963.1</article-id>
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                <subj-group subj-group-type="heading">
                    <subject>Research Article</subject>
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                <subj-group>
                    <subject>Articles</subject>
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            <title-group>
                <article-title>Implication of the 2014 World Health Organization Integrated Management of Childhood Illness Pneumonia Guidelines with and without pulse oximetry use in Malawi: A retrospective cohort study</article-title>
                <fn-group content-type="pub-status">
                    <fn>
                        <p>[version 1; peer review: 1 approved, 1 approved with reservations]</p>
                    </fn>
                </fn-group>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Hooli</surname>
                        <given-names>Shubhada</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Formal Analysis</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-4596-448X</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Makwenda</surname>
                        <given-names>Charles</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a2">2</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Lufesi</surname>
                        <given-names>Norman</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a3">3</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Colbourn</surname>
                        <given-names>Tim</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Funding Acquisition</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Supervision</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a4">4</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Mvalo</surname>
                        <given-names>Tisungane</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-6775-7919</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a5">5</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a6">6</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>McCollum</surname>
                        <given-names>Eric D.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Funding Acquisition</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a7">7</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a8">8</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>King</surname>
                        <given-names>Carina</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Formal Analysis</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Supervision</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-6885-6716</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a4">4</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a9">9</xref>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Pediatrics, Division of Emergency Medicine, Baylor College of Medicine, Houston, TX, USA</aff>
                <aff id="a2">
                    <label>2</label>Parent and Child Health Initiative, Lilongwe, Malawi</aff>
                <aff id="a3">
                    <label>3</label>Republic of Malawi Ministry of Health, Lilongwe, Malawi</aff>
                <aff id="a4">
                    <label>4</label>Institute for Global Health, University College London, London, UK</aff>
                <aff id="a5">
                    <label>5</label>University of North Carolina Project Malawi, Lilongwe, Malawi</aff>
                <aff id="a6">
                    <label>6</label>Department of Pediatrics, University of North Carolina School of Medicine, Chapel Hill, NC, USA</aff>
                <aff id="a7">
                    <label>7</label>Global Program in Respiratory Sciences, Eudowood Division of Pediatric Respiratory Sciences, Department of Pediatrics, School of Medicine, Johns Hopkins University, Baltimore, MD, USA</aff>
                <aff id="a8">
                    <label>8</label>Department of International Health, Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health, Baltimore, MD, USA</aff>
                <aff id="a9">
                    <label>9</label>Department of Global Public Health, Karolinska Institute, Stockholm, Sweden</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:hooli@bcm.edu">hooli@bcm.edu</email>
                </corresp>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>15</day>
                <month>5</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>7</volume>
            <elocation-id>71</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>17</day>
                    <month>1</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
                </date>
            </history>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Hooli S et al.</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
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                    <license-p>This is an open access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <abstract>
                <p>
                    <bold>Background:</bold> Under-5 pneumonia mortality remains high in low-income countries. In 2014 the World Health Organization (WHO) advised that children with chest indrawing pneumonia, but without danger signs or peripheral oxygen saturation (SpO
                    <sub>2</sub>) &lt; 90% be treated in the community, rather than hospitalized. In Malawi there is limited pulse oximetry availability.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Methods:</bold> Secondary analysis of 13,413 under-5 pneumonia cases in Malawi. Pneumonia associated case fatality ratios (CFR) were calculated by disease severity under the assumptions of the 2005 and 2014 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.who.int/maternal_child_adolescent/documents/IMCI_chartbooklet/en/">WHO Integrated Management of Childhood Illness</ext-link> (IMCI) guidelines, with and without pulse oximetry. We investigated if pulse oximetry readings were missing not at random (MNAR).</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Results:</bold> The CFR of patients classified as having non-severe pneumonia per the 2014 IMCI guidelines doubled under the assumption that pulse oximetry was not available (1.5% without pulse oximetry vs 0.7% with pulse oximetry, P&lt;0.001). When 2014 IMCI guidelines were applied with pulse oximetry and a SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> &lt; 90% as the threshold for referral and/or admission, the number of cases meeting hospitalization criteria decreased by 70.3%. Unrecorded pulse oximetry readings were MNAR with an adjusted odds for mortality of 4.9 (3.8, 6.3), similar to that of a SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> &lt; 90%. Although fewer girls were hospitalized, female sex was an independent mortality risk factor.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Conclusions:</bold> In Malawi, implementation of the 2014 WHO IMCI pneumonia guidelines, without pulse oximetry, will miss high risk cases. Alternatively, implementation of pulse oximetry may result in a large reduction in hospitalization rates without significantly increasing non-severe pneumonia associated CFR if the inability to obtain a pulse oximetry reading is considered a WHO danger sign.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>infant</kwd>
                <kwd>child</kwd>
                <kwd>pneumonia</kwd>
                <kwd>child mortality</kwd>
                <kwd>oximetry</kwd>
                <kwd>Malawi</kwd>
                <kwd>Africa</kwd>
                <kwd>World Health Organization</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <award-group id="fund-1">
                    <funding-source>National Institutes of Health National Heart Lung and Blood Institute</funding-source>
                    <award-id>T32HL072748-11</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <award-group id="fund-2" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/100000865">
                    <funding-source>Gates Foundation</funding-source>
                    <award-id>OPP1044260</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <funding-statement>This work was supported by the Gates Foundation [OPP 1044260]. EDM received additional funding from the National Institutes of Health National Heart Lung and Blood Institute (T32 HL072748-11).</funding-statement>
                <funding-statement>
                    <italic>The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.</italic>
                </funding-statement>
            </funding-group>
        </article-meta>
    </front>
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        <sec>
            <title>Background</title>
            <p>Annually over 800,000 deaths of children under 5 years old are attributable to acute lower respiratory infections worldwide
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup>. Due to its high prevalence, pneumonia is one of the primary diseases addressed by the 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.who.int/maternal_child_adolescent/documents/IMCI_chartbooklet/en/">WHO Integrated Management of Childhood Illness</ext-link> (IMCI) guidelines, the standard of care at many frontline, outpatient healthcare facilities in low-income and middle-income countries (LMICs). These guidelines rely on health worker recognition of clinical &#x2018;danger signs&#x2019; such as inability to feed, lethargy, intractable vomiting, or convulsions to determine if a child should be referred for further evaluation by a trained medical provider at a hospital and receive more intensive treatment. 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.who.int/publications/i/item/9789241507813">Two key pneumonia case classification policy changes</ext-link> were made in the 2014 IMCI revision. First, when pulse oximetry is available, children aged 2&#x2013;59 months old with a peripheral oxyhemoglobin saturation (SpO
                <sub>2</sub>) &lt;90% (i.e., hypoxemia) should be referred for hospital care. Second, children with chest indrawing, but no general danger signs, were reclassified as appropriate for outpatient management with oral antibiotics, even when SpO
                <sub>2</sub> is not measured.</p>
            <p>There have been several attempts to determine if chest indrawing pneumonia, without the presence of general danger signs, can be appropriately managed as an outpatient
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-2">2</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>
                </sup>. One effort by Agweyu 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> retrospectively examined the implication of shifting hospitalized Kenyan children with chest indrawing but without general danger signs into outpatient care. The authors reported that children previously categorized as severe pneumonia (i.e., chest-indrawing but no general danger signs) had an in-hospital case fatality ratio (CFR) of 2.7%
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-2">2</xref>
                </sup>. Similar to many LMIC healthcare settings, pulse oximetry was unavailable, so the authors could not comment on the impact of identifying hypoxemia.</p>
            <p>The Malawi Ministry of Health (MOH) adopted the 2014 IMCI pneumonia guidelines in 2018. However, based on anecdotal evidence [SH], some clinicians are hesitant to adopt the revised guidelines into practice due to concerns that the change may result in increased out of hospital complications and/or community deaths. This may in part stem from pulse oximetry&#x2019;s limited availability in outpatient settings throughout Malawi, and a high proportion of children dying from pneumonia at home after seeking hospital care
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>. A non-inferiority trial conducted in Malawi showed HIV-uninfected children with chest indrawing pneumonia could be safely treated as outpatients with 3 versus 5 days of amoxicillin. However, all enrolled children were screened with pulse oximetry and none had a SpO
                <sub>2</sub>&lt;90%
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                </sup>. In a study linking community health worker (CHW) and outpatient pneumonia episodes with 30-day mortality, augmentation of existing health centre guidelines with pulse oximetry identified high risk cases that would otherwise be missed by clinical guidelines alone
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>. The current CHW guidelines, unlike those for outpatient settings, recommend hospital referral of children with chest indrawing. The added value of pulse oximetry for identifying referral eligible children was less when chest indrawing triggered referral
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>To some degree chest indrawing may be a clinical marker of respiratory insufficiency or impending failure. Chest indrawing is the paradoxical inward pulling of the soft tissue below the ribs during inspiration. It often occurs due to increasing negative intrapleural pressure generated by patients attempting to expand stiff, diseased lungs, although in younger children and infants with more compliant, cartilaginous chest walls it may also occur when the lungs are healthy. Chest indrawing increases lung tidal volumes and minute ventilation to improve overall ventilation
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                </sup>. Aside from respiratory rate and SpO
                <sub>2</sub>, chest indrawing is the only indicator of lung mediated respiratory distress in the 2005 IMCI guidelines. The 2014 IMCI guidelines do not contain any lower airway sign that triggers hospital referral in settings where pulse oximetry is not used.</p>
            <p>We aimed to determine the impact of implementing the 2005 or 2014 IMCI pneumonia guidelines on inpatient case fatality rates with either universal or no pulse oximetry availability in routine care settings.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="methods">
            <title>Methods</title>
            <sec>
                <title>Setting</title>
                <p>Malawi is a low-income country in southeastern sub-Saharan Africa with a high prevalence of 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.who.int/docs/default-source/malaria/world-malaria-reports/world-malaria-report-2020-regional-briefing-kit-eng.pdf?sfvrsn=3ff894_7">malaria</ext-link> and 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.unaids.org/en/regionscountries/countries/malawi">HIV</ext-link>.  Study sites were in the central region, in Mchinji and Lilongwe districts. Data was collected from four rural, non-governmental Christian Health Association of Malawi (CHAM) hospitals, two government districts and one regional tertiary referral hospital. At the time of data collection this represented a 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.nsomalawi.mw/index.php?option=com_content&amp;view=article&amp;id=107%3A2008-population-and-housing-census-results&amp;catid=8&amp;Itemid=6">catchment of 1.3 million people</ext-link>.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>Study design</title>
                <p>We conducted a retrospective secondary analysis of hospital inpatient data that was collected prospectively as part of active surveillance, in a real world setting, during a pneumococcal vaccine effectiveness study, between 2012&#x2013;2014
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                    </sup>. Data collection was surpervised and remediation provided internmittnelty throughout the study period in order to minimize bias.  Hospitalization practices reflect Malawi MOH recommendations prior to the 2014 WHO guideline revision. Children aged 2&#x2013;59 months routinely diagnosed with pneumonia and hospitalized were included. As HIV status was not consistently recorded amongst all cases, we excluded known HIV-infected and exposed children. Notably, the 2014 IMCI guidelines still recommends hospital referral for HIV-infected and exposed children with chest indrawing. Additionally, we excluded children who were receiving supplemental oxygen at the time of initial SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> measurement. The study sample size was determined using convenience of access to retrospective data.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>Data collection</title>
                <p>Methodology, training and quality assurance methods have been previously described
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                    </sup>. Briefly, in 2001 the Malawi MOH implemented a pneumonia surveillance program called the Child Lung Health Program (CLHP)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                    </sup>. At study sites we augmented this existing surveillance program infrastructure by implementing active surveillance with pulse oximetry measurement and data quality assurance. The Lifebox Foundation (London, UK) supplied pulse oximeters with adult clip probes (Acare Technology, Xinzhuang, Taiwan, China) which MOH health workers were trained to use via a standardized protocol. Staff were instructed to place the clip probe on the big toe in children under 10 kg or, in children over 10 kg, a finger. This methodology has been shown to be a reliable and accurate way to measure SpO
                    <sub>2</sub>
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>. Weekly death audits occurred at each study site to ensure that all in-hospital deaths were captured. Study sites were closely supervised, and sites or clinicians with subpar performance received remediation training and supervision. Data was collected using the existing Malawi MOH CLHP case report forms that was subsequently entered into a study-built database, which was routinely checked as part of quality assurance. The original CLHP forms were referred to during data cleaning.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>Analysis</title>
                <p>Demographic and clinical characteristics were described as frequencies and proportions. We calculated CFRs with 95% confidence intervals. We compared CFRs by pneumonia classifications based on the 2005 and 2014 WHO guidelines (
                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="B1">Box 1</xref>) under two assumptions: without and with pulse oximetry (SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> &lt;90% considered as a danger sign), using chi-squared tests. If a case had any missing data for the parameters used to classify pneumonia, it was designated as &#x201c;unable to categorize&#x201d;. In our previous work analyzing mortality risk factors of Malawian under 2-month olds with acute lower respiratory infections using data from the same study, we found that SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> was missing not at random (MNAR) and independently associated with in-hospital mortality
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                    </sup>. Using logistic regression with multiple imputation with chained equations and pattern mixture modeling we explored if SpO
                    <sub>2</sub> was MNAR in this cohort of older children as well
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>. We used 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Stata Statistical Software: Release 14</italic>. College Station, TX: StataCorp LP. to conduct all analyses, an open-access alternative that can perform an equivalent function is RStudio.</p>
                <p>
                    <boxed-text content-type="website" id="B1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                        <caption>
                            <title>Box 1. 2005 vs 2014 WHO IMCI pneumonia hospital referral criteria for 2&#x2013;59 month olds</title>
                        </caption>
                        <p>
                            <table-wrap id="T1a" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                                    <thead>
                                        <tr>
                                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Pneumonia Classification</th>
                                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2005</th>
                                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2014</th>
                                        </tr>
                                    </thead>
                                    <tbody>
                                        <tr>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Non-severe (outpatient)</td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Fast breathing
                                                <sup>
                                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN7">a</xref>
                                                </sup>
                                            </td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Fast breathing
                                                <sup>
                                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN7">a</xref>
                                                </sup> and/or chest indrawing</td>
                                        </tr>
                                        <tr>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Severe (hospitalize)</td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Chest indrawing</td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Any danger signs
                                                <sup>
                                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN7">b</xref>
                                                </sup> or SpO
                                                <sub>2</sub>&lt;90%
                                                <sup>
                                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN7">c</xref>
                                                </sup>
                                            </td>
                                        </tr>
                                        <tr>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Very severe (hospitalize)</td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Any danger signs
                                                <sup>
                                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN7">b</xref>
                                                </sup>
                                            </td>
                                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top"/>
                                        </tr>
                                    </tbody>
                                </table>
                                <table-wrap-foot>
                                    <fn>
                                        <p id="TFN7">
                                            <sup>a</sup>Fast breathing for age: respiration rate (RR) &gt; 50 breaths per minute (bpm) in 2&#x2013;11 month olds and RR &gt; 40 bpm in 12&#x2013;59 month olds; 
                                            <sup>b</sup>General danger signs include: unable to drink/feed, convulsions, sleepy/lethargic, vomiting everything, stridor, severe acute malnutrition; 
                                            <sup>c</sup>Optional criteria in settings where pulse oximetry is available.</p>
                                    </fn>
                                </table-wrap-foot>
                            </table-wrap>
                        </p>
                    </boxed-text>
</p>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>Ethical considerations</title>
                <p>Study ethical approval was provided by the National Health Sciences Research Committee of Malawi (reference: 941, November 14, 2011) and the Ethics Committee of University College London (reference: 2006/002, November 1, 2011). Neither committee required informed consent as the study collected routine clinical data.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="results">
            <title>Results</title>
            <p>This analysis includes 13,413 cases with an overall CFR of 2.8% (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>). Clinical characteristics of the cohort are described in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>. A smaller proportion of the hospitalized cases were girls compared with boys (P&lt;0.001), with 3.7% without a recorded sex.</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Cases included in analysis.</title>
                </caption>
                <graphic orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://gatesopenresearch-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/15257/56e429ed-0751-40a8-99aa-5fc3822dde06_figure1.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <table-wrap id="T1" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Demographic and clinical characteristics of children diagnosed with pneumonia.</title>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Clinical Characteristics</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N = 13,413</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Age, median, months, (IQR)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">11 (6-20)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>, median, % (IQR)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">96 (93-98)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">SpO
                                <sub>2</sub> &#x2265; 90%, n (%)
                                <break/>SpO
                                <sub>2</sub> &lt; 90%, n (%)
                                <break/>Unrecorded SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>, n (%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10,003 (74.6)
                                <break/>1,249 (9.3)
                                <break/>2,161 (16.1)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Respiratory rate, median (IQR)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">58 (50-64)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Weight in kg, mean (SD)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">8.9 (2.8)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Male, n (%)
                                <break/>Female, n (%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7,215 (53.8)
                                <break/>5,700 (42.5)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">WAZ &gt; -2, n (%)
                                <break/>-3 &#x2264; WAZ &lt; -2, n (%)
                                <break/>WAZ &#x2264; -3, n (%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10,393 (77.5)
                                <break/>1,224 (9.1)
                                <break/>762 (5.7)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Chest wall indrawing, n (%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">11,185 (83.4)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">WHO danger signs
                                <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN1">*</xref>, n (%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2,230 (16.6)</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
                <table-wrap-foot>
                    <fn>
                        <p>SpO
                            <sub>2</sub>: peripheral capillary oxyhemoglobin saturation, IQR: interquartile range, CI: confidence interval, SD: standard deviation, WAZ: WHO weight-for-age z-score.</p>
                        <p id="TFN1">
                            <sup>*</sup>Danger signs include central cyanosis, stridor in a calm child, apnea, or a general danger sign (inability to drink and/or breastfeed, lethargy or unconscious, convulsions)</p>
                    </fn>
                </table-wrap-foot>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>In 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref> we compared, using the 2005 and 2014 guidelines, the proportion of cases diagnosed with pneumonia meeting hospital referral and/or admission criteria versus outpatient management and their respective CFRs. The CFRs of children meeting outpatient care criteria per the 2005 and 2014 guidelines were not statistically different (0.8 vs 0.7%). Due to missing data for parameters such as respiratory rate, chest indrawing and danger signs (independent of pulse oximetry reading), 720 cases (5.4%) and 16 deaths (4.3%) with an overall CFR of 2.2% could not be classified as having a specific pneumonia severity. Applying the 2005 guidelines without pulse oximetry, 11,484 cases and 99.1% (347/357) of the pneumonia severity classifiable deaths met hospital referral criteria. Notably, an additional 1,089 cases were unable to be categorized by the 2014 guidelines due to unrecorded pulse oximetry data (deaths=54, CFR 5.0%). In comparison, when using the 2014 guidelines with pulse oximetry, 3,106 cases and 79.2% (240/303) of categorizable deaths met referral criteria. This is a 73.0% reduction in hospital referral cases, however the number of deaths categorized as non-severe increased from 10 (CFR 0.7%) to 63 (CFR 0.8%). When SpO
                <sub>2</sub> is treated as an optional criteria, consistent with how the 2014 guidelines are written, the majority of these cases were re-classified as non-severe, outpatient appropriate (N=1,378, deaths = 60, CFR 4.4%). Of these cases 96.9% had chest indrawing (N = 1,335, deaths =59, CFR 4.4%).</p>
            <table-wrap id="T2" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Under 5 Pneumonia In-hospital Case Fatality Ratio Categorized by Pneumonia Severity and Pulse Oximetry Availability.</title>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="3" valign="top">Pneumonia Classification
                                <break/>(N=13,413 Deaths= 373)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="4" rowspan="1" valign="top">2005 WHO IMCI</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="4" rowspan="1" valign="top">2014 WHO IMCI</th>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="center" colspan="2" rowspan="1" valign="top">No SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>
                                <sup>
                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN2">a</xref>
                                </sup>
                            </th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="2" rowspan="1" valign="top">SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>
                                <sup>
                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN2">b</xref>
                                </sup>
                            </th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="2" rowspan="1" valign="top">SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>
                                <sup>
                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN2">c</xref>
                                </sup>
                            </th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="2" rowspan="1" valign="top">No SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>
                                <sup>
                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN2">d</xref>
                                </sup>
                            </th>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N (%)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Deaths (CFR)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N (%)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Deaths (CFR)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N (%)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Deaths (CFR)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N (%)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Deaths (CFR)</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                <bold>Non-severe</bold>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1,209
                                <break/>(9.0%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10
                                <break/>(0.8%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1,368
                                <break/>(10.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7
                                <break/>(0.5%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">8,498
                                <break/>(63.4%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">63
                                <break/>(0.7%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10,463
                                <break/>(78.0%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">155
                                <break/>(1.5%)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                <bold>Severe</bold>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">9,254
                                <break/>(69.0%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">145
                                <break/>(1.6%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7,130
                                <break/>(53.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">56
                                <break/>(0.8%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3,106
                                <break/>(23.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">240
                                <break/>(7.7%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2,230
                                <break/>(16.6%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">202
                                <break/>(9.1%)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                <bold>Very severe</bold>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2,230
                                <break/>(16.6%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">202
                                <break/>(9.1%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3,106
                                <break/>(23.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">240
                                <break/>(7.7%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N/A</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N/A</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N/A</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">N/A</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                <bold>Hospital Referral Eligible Cases</bold>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">11,484
                                <break/>(85.6%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">347
                                <break/>(3.0%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10,236
                                <break/>(76.3%) </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">296
                                <break/>(2.9%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3,106
                                <break/>(23.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">240
                                <break/>(7.7%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2,230
                                <break/>(16.6%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">202
                                <break/>(9.1%)</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                <bold>Unable to Categorize</bold>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">720
                                <break/>(5.4%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">16
                                <break/>(2.2%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1,809
                                <break/>(13.5%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">70
                                <break/>(3.9%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1,809
                                <break/>(13.5%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">70
                                <break/>(3.9%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">720
                                <break/>(5.4%)</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">16
                                <break/>(2.2%)</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
                <table-wrap-foot>
                    <fn>
                        <p id="TFN2">N = number, % = percentage of total cases, CFR = case fatality ratio; 
                            <sup>a</sup>Guidelines as published, 
                            <sup>b</sup>2005 WHO IMCI with SpO
                            <sub>2 </sub>&lt;90% included as a danger sign and excluding cases with &#x2018;missing&#x2019; pulse oximetry, 
                            <sup>c</sup>2014 WHO IMCI guidelines and excluding cases with &#x2018;missing&#x2019; pulse oximetry, 
                            <sup>d</sup>2014 WHO IMCI without pulse oximetry</p>
                    </fn>
                </table-wrap-foot>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>Pulse oximetry is not universally available in outpatient clinics or hospitals in Malawi. Under this assumption we calculated CFRs for differing pneumonia severities without considering SpO
                <sub>2</sub>. The CFR for patients with 2014 non-severe pneumonia, without pulse oximetry, was twice that of those categorized as having 2005 IMCI guideline non-severe pneumonia (1.5% vs 0.8%, P=0.052). Under the scenario of implementing the 2014 WHO guidelines with pulse oximetry, in comparison to its implementation without pulse oximetry, the CFR of non-severe pneumonia decreased by over 50% (1.5% without pulse oximetry vs 0.7% with pulse oximetry, P&lt;0.001). However it is crucial to emphasize that many of the pre-2014 WHO guideline non-severe pneumonia cases and associated deaths were unable to be categorized due to missing pulse oximetry data. We were unable to categorize the pneumonia severity of 14.5% (N= 54) of the total deaths due to unrecorded SpO
                <sub>2</sub> data. Our analysis, presented in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T3">Table 3</xref>, suggests that oxygen saturation was MNAR as an unrecorded SpO
                <sub>2</sub> was an independent mortality risk factor.</p>
            <table-wrap id="T3" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 3. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Evaluation if SpO
                        <sub>2</sub> recordings are Missing Not at Random [MNAR] (N=13,413 Deaths= 373).</title>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Variable</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Adjusted
                                <break/> Odds Ratio</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">95% Confidence
                                <break/> Interval</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">SpO
                                <sub>2</sub> &lt; 90%</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">4.0</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3.0,5.3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Unrecorded SpO
                                <sub>2</sub>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">4.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3.8,6.3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">-3&lt;WAZ&#x2264;-2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2.0,3.8</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">WAZ&#x2264;-3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2.4</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.7,3.3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Female</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.0,1.6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Chest indrawing</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.0</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">0.6,1.6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Wheezing</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">0.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">0.5,1.0</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">WHO Danger Signs
                                <sup>
                                    <xref ref-type="other" rid="TFN3">a</xref>
                                </sup>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">4.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3.3,5.6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Under 12 months old</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1.0,1.5</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
                <table-wrap-foot>
                    <fn>
                        <p>SpO
                            <sub>2</sub>: peripheral oxyhemoglobin saturation, WAZ: WHO weight-for-age z-score;</p>
                        <p id="TFN3">
                            <sup>a</sup>Danger signs include unable to drink/feed, convulsions, sleepy/lethargic, vomiting everything, stridor</p>
                    </fn>
                </table-wrap-foot>
            </table-wrap>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="discussion">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>We explored the impact of applying the 2014 WHO IMCI guidelines, using a large existing dataset of children admitted to hospital with clinically defined pneumonia. If the 2014 WHO IMCI guidelines are implemented without compulsory pulse oximetry measurement of children evaluated for pneumonia in Malawian outpatient settings, some children that could benefit from inpatient oxygen treatment will likely be missed. This could result in increased child pneumonia deaths. A direct comparison of non-severe, outpatient pneumonia CFRs showed a two-fold higher CFR when using the 2014 rather than the 2005 guidelines without pulse oximetry, from 1.5% vs 0.8% (P=0.052). However, implementation of the 2014 IMCI guidelines with compulsory pulse oximetry decreased non-severe pneumonia CFR by 50%, to 0.7% for this group.</p>
            <p>We found that the inability to obtain a pulse oximetry reading was MNAR, suggestive as an independent mortality risk factor. We found a similar finding amongst hospitalized Malawian infants under 2 months old
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                </sup>. In a separate study evaluating pulse oximetry use in outpatient settings, we found that 1 out of the 32 cases that were not clinically eligible for referral and had an unrecorded pulse oximetry level died within 30 days
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                </sup>. It is challenging to interpret this finding because although we witnessed study staff struggle with obtaining a pulse oximetry reading in some children, it is plausible that these data may be missing not at random but for other reasons. For instance, clinicians may not have paused to measure a pulse oximetry reading in children who presented to care when obviously critically ill. Biologically, the inability to measure pulse oximetry could reflect poor peripheral perfusion, which occurs in high systemic vascular resistance states such as shock. There are ongoing studies evaluating if a peripheral perfusion index, derived from the plethysmography signal of pulse oximetry, could be used as an early marker of microcirculatory dysfunction during states such as sepsis and compensated hypovolemic shock before changes in mean arterial blood pressure, which is currently used to determine macrovascular collapse
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-19">19</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>In contrast with Agweyu&#x2019;s findings from Kenya, we were able to explore the potential implications of the 2014 guidelines in the context of pulse oximetry. Our study has similar findings, using retrospective data from hospitalized cases, in that there was an unacceptably high CFR amongst children diagnosed with non-severe pneumonia using the 2014 guidelines without pulse oximetry. There are some notable differences between the study populations, with the Kenyan study reporting a higher overall CFR (5.2% vs 2.8%), a higher CFR in children classified as non-severe pneumonia (2.7% vs 1.5%), and fewer cases from malaria-endemic regions (33% vs 100%)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-2">2</xref>
                </sup>. These are important distinctions as the case fatality difference could be attributed to a variety of factors, including an improved survival benefit in Malawi with inpatient use of pulse oximetry and subsequent oxygen treatment. While this is conjecture, the approximate 50% reduction in mortality between the settings is in line with findings from Nigeria, showing a similar reduction in inpatient pneumonia mortality following pulse oximetry introduction
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-20">20</xref>
                </sup>. Another explanation could be the difference in malaria prevalence amongst these populations, as the IMCI guidelines for pneumonia diagnosis overlap with the clinical diagnosis of malaria
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-21">21</xref>
                </sup>. Given that they did not have pulse oximetry data and our dataset did not include information about dehydration or pallor, direct comparisons of independent risk factors for pneumonia-associated mortality between the two studies is problematic. Though we do report mortality risk factors in this study, the intention was solely to explore if pulse oximetry was MNAR. We have previously published our findings, using this same dataset, on pneumonia related mortality risk factors and developed a clinical prediction rule, the Respiratory Index of Severity in Children &#x2013; Malawi (RISC-Malawi), though excluding patients without a recorded pulse oximetry reading
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-22">22</xref>
                </sup>. An important finding was that girls had a higher adjusted odds for in-hospital pneumonia related mortality.</p>
            <p>Notably both the Kenyan and our studies report fewer girls were hospitalized with pneumonia, though female sex was an independent mortality risk factor. We observed the same pattern when examining pneumonia related mortality risk factors in Malawian infants under two months old, and this is consistent with a large metanalysis of acute lower respiratory illness mortality risk factors
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-23">23</xref>
                </sup>.  However, in our previous Malawian studies, utilizing data collected concurrently as this study, in outpatient settings (community health workers and health centres), we found that similar proportions of boys and girls, aged 0&#x2013;59 months old, sought evaluation for pneumonia
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                </sup>. Our incidental findings that an equal proportion of girls and boys presented for outpatient pneumonia care, fewer girls were hospitalized, yet being a girl was an independent pneumonia-related mortality risk factor cannot go ignored. These findings are consistent with those of a retrospective qualitative study assessing care seeking patterns in the same region of Malawi (Mchinji) that suggested that girls presented to the hospital more often than boys but were admitted less often
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>. Differences in the type of care girls receive and their outcomes must be examined.</p>
            <p>Pulse oximetry implementation, while crucial to health systems strengthening, is not without challenges. First, more work must be done to identify context appropriate SpO
                <sub>2</sub> thresholds at which to refer patients for hospital evaluation, hospitalize patients, and initiate or wean supplemental oxygen. Previous findings suggest that moderate hypoxemia of SpO
                <sub>2</sub> 90&#x2013;92% is a mortality risk factor in Malawian children under 5 with acute lower respiratory infections
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-22">22</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-24">24</xref>
                </sup>. One hypothesis for this finding is that pulse oximeters may be inaccurate in children with dark skin tones. A research report from the United States suggested that pulse oximetry may over-estimate SpO
                <sub>2</sub> in adults with dark skin, potentially leading to missed hypoxemic cases and further exacerbating racial health disparities
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-25">25</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-26">26</xref>
                </sup>. While this study had some methodological limitations such as using paired pulse oximetry and arterial blood gas readings that were time-delayed by up to 10 minutes and only adjusting for poor peripheral perfusion in one single center cohort, this concept warrants investigation in children. While there are clinical trials in low- and high-income countries exploring the optimum SpO
                <sub>2</sub> threshold for initiation of supplemental oxygen, they have prompted debate on the ethics of such studies and, at the time of writing, have not reported findings
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-27">27</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-28">28</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>Second, pulse oximetry programs must be implemented with a clearly defined clinician mentoring and longitudinal implementation plan. Even when available in health facilities, barriers exist to pulse oximeter utilization
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                </sup>. They found an interdependence of pulse oximetry usage and oxygen therapy availability. This suggests that, in order to ensure usage, pulse oximetry must be implemented in concert with supplemental oxygen and other types of reparatory support, rather than as a separate health system intervention.</p>
            <p>Cost savings from reduced hospitalizations at both the household and health system levels, compounded with the reduced clinical burden on already limited hospital staff, may have significant spillover effects that we cannot capture in this analysis. It is plausible that, in certain settings, pulse oximetry implementation may in effect pay for itself by reducing downstream costs. As health systems move towards universal integration of pulse oximetry, these potential savings should be accounted for in order to make accurate comparisons with other high priority interventions.</p>
            <p>The main limitation of this analysis is that we extrapolate potential outpatient outcomes from hospital inpatient data. We may be underestimating, to varying degrees, the true CFR of these groups. Hospitalized patients may have received more effective interventions, such as intravenous antibiotics, that they would not have received if discharged home. Alternatively, hospitalization may place these children at risk of contracting hospital-acquired infections and other communicable diseases. We found that pulse oximetry recordings were MNAR. As we have previously reported, it is unclear if these data are missing because patients were critically ill and clinicians were unable to obtain an appropriate pulse oximeter read due to poor perfusion or if they simply did not record the measurement
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                </sup>. Our anecdotal experience suggests the former scenario is not uncommon. In real world clinical settings, not all children with severe disease present with the limited criteria in the IMCI guidelines. Clinician judgement of illness severity was not recorded in this data set, so we are unable to determine how many cases classified as non-severe would have been hospitalized regardless of the guideline recommendation.</p>
            <p>These data strongly support compulsory pulse oximetry use if Malawi is to fully adopt the 2014 IMCI pneumonia guidelines in outpatient facilities. Our findings suggest that the implementation of the 2014 IMCI guidelines would likely result in a marked decrease in under-five pneumonia related hospitalizations. We would recommend that children under 5 years old with chest indrawing in whom pulse oximetry is unable to be obtained, still warrant referral for further evaluation. It is imperative for country level ministries of health in other LMICs to assess the potential effects of the 2014 policy changes in their own settings before widespread implementation. In Malawi, implementation of the 2014 WHO IMCI guidelines, without standard pulse oximetry measurement in children evaluated for pneumonia in outpatient settings may result in missed hospital referral opportunities of high-risk cases.</p>
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            <title>Data availability</title>
            <p>The data is owned by the Malawi Ministry of Health. As such, and given that the data is not de-identified, readers/reviewers must apply for access to the data. Enquiries for data access should be addressed to Mr. Norman Lufesi (
                <email xlink:href="mailto:nlufesi@gmail.com">nlufesi@gmail.com</email>) the Acting Chief of Emergency and Critical Care Services of the Malawi Ministry of Health who will facilitate access. Data access will be granted after approval by the Malawi Ministry of Health and the Malawi National Health Science Research Committee.</p>
            <sec>
                <title>Reporting guidelines</title>
                <p>Figshare: STROBE checklist for &#x2018;Implication of the 2014 World Health Organization Integrated Management of Childhood Illness Pneumonia Guidelines with and without pulse oximetry use in Malawi: A retrospective cohort study&#x2019;. 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.21346797">https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.21346797</ext-link>
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                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-32">32</xref>
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                <p>Data are available under the terms of the Creative Commons Zero "No rights reserved" data waiver (CC0 1.0 Public domain dedication).</p>
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        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.21956/gatesopenres.15257.r33639</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Gray</surname>
                        <given-names>Amy</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r33639a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-0127-0769</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r33639a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Paediatrics, The Royal Children's Hospital Melbourne, The University of Melbourne, Victoria, Australia</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>19</day>
                <month>7</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Gray A</copyright-statement>
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        <body>
            <p>Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper which addresses an important topic.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Background:</underline>
            </p>
            <p> I thought the background outlined succinctly the key challenges and changes related to pneumonia classification and clinician management decisions. Well done.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Methods:</underline>
            </p>
            <p> I presume the data was collected from this set available from 2012-14 as it predates the change in IMNCI guidelines. It would be good to be explicit about this intention if this is true.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Results:</underline>
            </p>
            <p> These are well described with appropriate supporting tables.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Discussion:</underline>
            </p>
            <p> Good summary of findings in first paragraph and comparison with other literature in subsequent paragraphs. With good reference to practical considerations.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Overall I throroughly enjoyed reading this publication, its findings and discussion. Some minor corrections:</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Study design:</underline>
            </p>
            <p> - "provided intermittently."</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Discussion:</underline> 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Paragraph 1: remove "from" 1.5% vs 0.8%</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Paragraph 4: Notably (remove "both") the Kenyan and our studies...as there are more than 2? Or is it only referring to two?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Paragraph 4: concurrently "with" this study...</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Paragraph 6:..."respiratory" support.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Paediatrics, quality of care for children including oxygen systems, health professional education.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
        </body>
        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment3647-33639">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Hooli</surname>
                            <given-names>Shubhada</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Baylor College of Medicine, USA</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>2</day>
                    <month>11</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
                </pub-date>
            </front-stub>
            <body>
                <p>Dear Reviewer,&#x00a0;</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Thank you for your overall positive comments. Your suggested grammatical corrections have been made in the revised manuscript.</p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
    </sub-article>
    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report33354">
        <front-stub>
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            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Baltzell</surname>
                        <given-names>Kimberly</given-names>
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                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-5937-7449</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r33354a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Family Health Care Nursing, Institute of Global Health Sciences, University of California San Francisco, San Francisco, CA, USA</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>20</day>
                <month>6</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Baltzell K</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access peer review report distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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        <body>
            <p>The topic is important and needs study such as this one.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Background:</bold> the background was compelling and complete and makes the case for this sort of study. It was not clear to me why the study was published so long after data was collected.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Study Design: </bold>While the study did not include patients &lt;2 months of age, IMCI was updated in 2019 to include significant changes for managing such patients. This would be worth mentioning. To note, there were several typos in this section requiring a careful proof-read.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Methods: </bold>The authors mention the team was supervised to ensure activities were carried out properly. However, there was no mention of who was doing the supervising, if supervision was constant, e.g. including night shift. In addition, it would be helpful to know what sort of remediation occurred if something was amiss. I would appreciate knowing more about the pulse ox that was used, the accuracy and use in other similar populations. For the population of interest, were these only patients that were hospitalized directly or hospitalized after referral from a health facility. If they were two different groups, it would be curious to know if those who presented directly to the hospital had better outcomes than those who were admitted only after referral from a health facility if this information is available.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Results:</bold> no comments.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Discussion:</bold> It was important to add information about skin pigment and its impact on pulse ox readings. As mentioned earlier, perhaps more information on the pulse ox used and the justification for its use at that point in time. Also, was there follow up of the children who were not referred to see if there were poor outcomes in that group at a later time? In other words, did the patients who were not referred were assumed to have recovered?</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>General:</bold> Thank you for a very interesting paper. As mentioned above, I am curious why there was such a long time since the collecting of the data and the publication, especially given the changes in IMCI since these data were collected. And if IMCI revisions in 2014 led to worse outcomes in some groups, it is important to share the information sooner rather than later.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>I cannot comment. A qualified statistician is required.</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>NA</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                        <name>
                            <surname>Hooli</surname>
                            <given-names>Shubhada</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Baylor College of Medicine, USA</aff>
                    </contrib>
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                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>2</day>
                    <month>11</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
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                <p>Dear Reviewer,&#x00a0;</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Thank you for taking the time to review this manuscript, provide your insights, and overall positive remarks. The hypothesis of this manuscript was first explored by Ambrose Agweyu in 2019 (Lancet Global Health). It was then that we decided to conduct a similar analysis. We had submitted this initially as a research letter to a different journal, were advised to submit as a full paper which was then not accepted for publication, partly due to time since data was collected.. We agree this is delayed, but this analysis has been in review, in some form, since 2020 and was a key driver for submitting to Gates Open Research.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> In terms of study design, we approached this analysis similar to how the World Health Organization divides its guidance and focused on children aged 2 months &#x2013; 5 years. Notation of the 2019 change to the guidance as it relates to infants under 2 months old has been added.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> In terms of methodology, a notable aspect of this study is it was conducted under real-world circumstances; not within the rigid supervision of a clinical study. Therefore its results are more generalizable to similar populations. Clinicians were supervised by Ministry of Health officials including medical officers and the District Medical Officer who were on premises during traditional work hours. Consistent with other district hospitals in Malawi nighttime care was provided by a skeleton staff. However, this routine supervision was enhanced with mentorship visits, where study and Ministry of Health staff observed oximetry practice and provided remedial training when needed.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> We agree that there may be a difference between the outcomes of children who were admitted after initially presenting to the district hospital or upon referral from an outpatient health facility is well taken. Unfortunately we did not record this type of data, nor are we able to retrospectively extract these data from medical records. Members of our group recently conducted a study exploring this hypothesis which is available as a pre-print (Selsto F1000&#x00a0;https://f1000research.com/articles/12-1053).</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> The pulse oximeter used was the Lifebox oximeter, with an adult clip probe. The healthcare workers were trained to use the big toe in younger children, or the thumb in older children. These devices have been used in other similar contexts (e.g. Nigeria), and are commonly used in surgical care in LMICs. We have added this information to the text. This device was chosen as its relatively low cost, robust and has well-established distribution in sub-Saharan Africa, making it pragmatic.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Your point about the potential inaccuracy of pulse oximetry in patients with dark skin tones is well made. Our group has a review article currently undergoing peer review about this topic and is conducting a funded prospective study to determine if pulse oximeters are inaccurate in children with dark skin tones. Most studies evaluating if pulse oximeters are inaccurate in children with dark skin tones have been retrospective, without true skin tone measurement, using electronic medical record (EMR) documented race as a proxy. Multiple studies have shown that EMR documented race can frequently be inaccurate. The few pediatric prospective studies do not show that pulse oximeters are inaccurate in children with dark skin tones. We are hesitant to briefly introduce this concept into the discussion because it is nuanced, and we do not want to inadvertently dissuade clinicians from using pulse oximeters.</p>
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                <p> Unfortunately we do not have follow up data on children who were not referred to the hospital.&#x00a0;The parent study&#x2019;s aim was to determine the impact of pneumococcus vaccine implementation in Malawi and showed positive impact. This is an unplanned secondary analysis of cross-sectional data collected from patients hospitalized at district hospitals. We did not collect data on patients referred from an outpatient health facility and, as such, cannot comment on patients who were not referred to the hospital.</p>
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                <p> We agree that it is critical for research results to be communicated to clinicians and public health organizations as soon as possible.&#x00a0;We would like to assure you that the Ministry of Health of Malawi&#x00a0; was a partner for this analysis and the World Health Organization was informed of our findings in the interim. Notably the World Health Organization published a separate paper exploring similar themes. The decision to conduct that study was informed by the findings of this paper and Dr. Hooli is the lead author. In follow up the World Health Organization is currently conducting a highly relevant study. So though there has been a delay in published dissemination of these findings many relevant bodies are aware. Notably, as is the case in many other areas of the world, the 2014 IMCI guidance has not been implemented in Malawi.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Again, thank you for taking the time to review this manuscript and providing such insightful comments.</p>
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