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            <journal-id journal-id-type="pmc">Gates Open Res</journal-id>
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                <journal-title>Gates Open Research</journal-title>
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            <issn pub-type="epub">2572-4754</issn>
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                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/gatesopenres.12788.2</article-id>
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                <article-title>Profile: Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System in peri-urban areas of Karachi, Pakistan</article-title>
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                        <p>[version 2; peer review: 2 approved with reservations, 2 not approved]</p>
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                        <surname>Muhammad Zeb</surname>
                        <given-names>Muhammad Ilyas</given-names>
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                        <surname>Fatima</surname>
                        <given-names>Urooj</given-names>
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                        <given-names>Abdul Momin</given-names>
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                        <surname>Ahmed</surname>
                        <given-names>Imran</given-names>
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                        <surname>Zaidi</surname>
                        <given-names>Anita K.M.</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Nisar</surname>
                        <given-names>Muhammad Imran</given-names>
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                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Paediatrics &amp; Child Health, Aga Khan University, Karachi, Pakistan</aff>
                <aff id="a2">
                    <label>2</label>Enteric and Diarrheal Diseases Programme, Bill &amp; Melinda Gates Foundation, Seattle, WA, 98109, USA</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:imran.nisar@aku.edu">imran.nisar@aku.edu</email>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>8</day>
                <month>12</month>
                <year>2022</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2018</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>2</volume>
            <elocation-id>2</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>15</day>
                    <month>9</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
                </date>
            </history>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2022 Muhammad Zeb MI et al.</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2022</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <abstract>
                <p>A Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS) was set up by the department of pediatrics and child health, Aga Khan University, Pakistan in peri-urban areas of Karachi to provide a platform for various research projects. It was established in five low-socioeconomic communities in a stepwise manner between  2003 and 2014. The total area currently under surveillance is 18.6 km2 covering a population of 302,944. We maintain a record of all births, deaths, pregnancies, and migration events by two monthly household visits. Verbal autopsies for stillbirths, deaths of children under the age of five years and adult female deaths are also conducted. For over a decade, the MCHSS has been a platform for a variety of studies describing the burden of various infectious diseases like typhoid, pneumonia and diarrhea, evaluation of effectiveness of various treatment regimens for neonatal sepsis, assessment of the acceptance of hospitalized care, determination of the etiology of moderate to severe diarrhea, assessment of burden and etiology of neonatal sepsis and a multi-center cohort study measuring the burden of stillbirths, neonatal and maternal deaths. More recently we have also established a bio-repository of the well-characterized maternal and newborn cohort.</p>
                <p>Through a well-established MCHSS, we aim to provide concrete evidence base to guide policy makers to make informed decisions at local, national, and international levels.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>Karachi</kwd>
                <kwd>Heath and Demographic Surveillance System</kwd>
                <kwd>HDSS</kwd>
                <kwd>maternal and child health</kwd>
                <kwd>longitudinal studies.</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <award-group id="fund-1" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/100000865">
                    <funding-source>Gates Foundation</funding-source>
                    <award-id>OPPGH5307</award-id>
                    <award-id>OPP1033572</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <award-group id="fund-2">
                    <funding-source>National Institutes of Health</funding-source>
                    <award-id>1D43TW007585-01</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <funding-statement>Gates Foundation [OPPGH5307, OPP1033572]. The DSS activities are funded by the Department of Pediatrics and Child Health of AKU through various research projects. Dr Imran Nisar and Dr Fyezah Jehan were supported by grant number 1 D43 TW007585-01 from the National Institute of Health&#x2019;s Fogarty International Center. The content is solely the responsibility of the authors and does not necessarily represent the official views of the National Institutes of Health.</funding-statement>
                <funding-statement>
                    <italic>The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.</italic>
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        <notes>
            <sec sec-type="version-changes">
                <label>Revised</label>
                <title>Amendments from Version 1</title>
                <p>We have updated version 2 according to the feedback by the reviewers. The article now describes the profile of a Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS) in peri-urban areas of Karachi, Pakistan. We have mentioned the commencement date of the surveillance system, response rates, migration details and various trends seen among the women and children in the MCHSS. We have also provided additional details with regards to key points such as the data collection process, database management and the structure of the MCHSS for better clarity. The article has been proofread to remove grammatical and typographical errors. The list of authors has also been updated.</p>
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        <sec>
            <title>Key messages</title>
            <p>&#x2022;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;The Karachi Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (KMCHSS) is a large demographic health surveillance system with a population of 302,944 in low socioeconomic peri-urban settings in Pakistan.</p>
            <p>&#x2022;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;It was designed as a platform to conduct epidemiological studies and provide a comprehensive sampling frame for these studies.</p>
            <p>&#x2022;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;The current focus is on etiological studies and controlled trials in the field of maternal and child health.</p>
            <p>&#x2022;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;All the studies aim for the improvement of public health policies and informed decision-making at local and national levels.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Why was the HDSS set up?</title>
            <p>The world urban population is estimated to increase from 54% in 2014 to 66% (2.5 billion) by 2050 of which, about 90% is concentrated in developing countries
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup> In Pakistan, Sindh is the most urbanized province where Karachi, a mega city, with the largest population is located. Urban dwellers mostly reside in settlements in peri-urban areas with the highest population density. These peri-urban areas experience a high maternal and childhood mortality
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-2">2</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                </sup>. Additionally, Pakistan has a national database for registering vital events, such as births and deaths, but the coverage is sub-optimal with many births and deaths going unrecorded. Undercounting of these events leads to inaccurate estimates of vital health indicators. This inaccuracy hinders the setting up of priorities and allocation of scarce resources at the national level. Thus, the Karachi Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (KMCHSS) was established in its rudimentary form in 2003 by the department of pediatrics and child health of the Aga Khan University, Pakistan, in peri-urban areas of Karachi, with the mandate and aim to provide a research platform for both observational and interventional studies that could influence decision-making and planning for health strategies at local, national and international levels, as well as research training opportunities for students in maternal and child health. At the outset, various epidemiological studies were conducted in the area on infectious diseases of children, vaccine coverage and the impact of multiple interventions to fill the gap by providing essential information on the key indicators through regular data collection.</p>
            <p>Some of the initial studies included identifying signs and symptoms in young infants requiring urgent referral and measuring the incidence of vaccine-preventable diseases such as rotavirus associated diarrhea, pneumonia, invasive pneumococcal disease (IPD), typhoid bacteremia and diseases such as omphalitis and their contribution in causing neonatal mortality
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>What does it cover now?</title>
            <p>The KMCHSS is an efficient, cohesive, and dynamic surveillance system. It regularly collects information on vital and demographic events. Additional studies later included, studying etiology of moderate to severe diarrhea, the Global Enteric Multicenter Study (GEMS), comparison of effectiveness of different antibiotic regimens given as an outpatient therapy for management of sepsis in young infants, Simplified Antibiotic Therapy Trial (SATT) and a community-based etiology study of possible serious bacterial infections in young infants (0&#x2013;59 days), Aetiology of Neonatal infection in South Asia (ANISA)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>
                </sup>. Currently, ongoing studies include, exploring coverage of routine childhood immunizations and their impact on disease transmission e.g., impact of 10 valent pneumococcal vaccine on nasopharyngeal carriage, a randomized control trial for comparison of Amoxicillin and placebo in non-severe pneumonia in children 2 to 59 months old (RETAPP) and usefulness of thermal images in diagnosing pneumonia in children under five years of age. In order to understand the intergenerational effects of disease across the continuum of adult female, maternal and child health, relevant large cohort studies were added, Alliance for Maternal and Newborn Health Improvement study (AMANHI)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>MCHSS structure</title>
            <sec>
                <title>What area does it cover?</title>
                <p>The KMCHSS is located in peri-urban areas of Karachi which is the largest metropolitan city, a commercial hub, and a principal port of Pakistan. Karachi has an estimated population of 23 million including peri-urban areas
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>. Located by the Arabian Sea, the KMCHSS was established in four peri-urban low-income communities in Korangi and Bin Qasim towns initially and extended to a fifth site recently. Of the four peri-urban communities, four are contiguously located along the seacoast of Karachi: Ibrahim Hyderi, Ibrahim Hyderi extension, Ali Akbar Shah Goth, and Rehri Goth. The KMCHSS lies on the latitude 24.8508&#x00b0; N and longitude 67.0181&#x00b0; and covers an area of 17.7 km
                    <sup>2</sup> (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>). Fishing is the main occupation of people living in these communities. The fifth community, Bhains colony, is located at the outskirts of Karachi and the source of their livelihood is cattle rearing. In recent years, Bhains colony has shown rapid urbanization.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 1. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Map showing location of the Demographic Surveillance System sites in Pakistan, Karachi, and Bin Qasim town.</title>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://gatesopenresearch-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/15209/1f82264c-9b3a-4fab-ba48-eda2c0586040_figure1.gif"/>
                </fig>
                <p>In 2010, the area was digitally mapped using global positioning system (GPS) techniques and boundaries were constructed. The area is divided into 238 blocks each comprising of 200&#x2013;250 structures. There are 42,565 structures in which 50,245 households are living. Each site has its own primary health care (PHC) center that has been established and operated by the Aga Khan University department of pediatrics and child health. These PHCs are accessible to populations within their catchment area and provide free care to children under five years of age.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>Who is covered by the KMCHSS and how often have they been followed up?</title>
                <p>The KMCHSS currently covers all the residents in the defined catchment areas with a particular focus on married women of reproductive age and their children under five years of age. In this system we define a &#x2018;structure&#x2019; as a building with a single entrance and a boundary. These structures can be houses, hospitals, dispensaries, schools, shops, parks etc. Each structure has a nine-character unique number assigned to it which is written on the front door of each structure with black permanent paint to withstand the weather changes. A &#x2018;household&#x2019; is a group of people living together under a roof (structure) and sharing the same cooking pot using the as per the International Network for Demographic Evaluation of Populations and Their Health (INDEPTH) definition of household
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                    </sup>. As the household is a basic unit, thus the number of households in each structure are determined, enumerated using an 11-character unique identification number. A &#x2018;resident&#x2019; is defined as a person who stayed for at least six months or intends to stay for more than six months in the community
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>. The KMCHSS was established stepwise. It was initiated in 2003 in four peri-urban areas with focus on providing a platform to various studies. In 2010, the area was geo-mapped, and the first census was conducted. In 2014, it was extended to an additional area where the census was conducted in 2014. The most recent census was conducted in 2017. Until 2014, quarterly enumeration was done, and since then it has intensified to every two months, to be done by trained community health care workers (CHWs). They captured all new pregnancies, births, deaths and in and out migrations. CHWs are females with a secondary level of education and are mostly residents of the same communities where the surveillance is taking place.</p>
                <p>We conducted a census by the end of 2017. The KMCHSS has a current population of 302,944 with 155,622 (51%) males and 147,322 (49%) females. Of the total population, 25% are females of reproductive age (between 15 to 49 years) and 14% are children under five years of age. The population age and sex structure are given in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f2" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 2. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Population age and sex structure in 2017.</title>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://gatesopenresearch-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/15209/1f82264c-9b3a-4fab-ba48-eda2c0586040_figure2.gif"/>
                </fig>
            </sec>
            <sec>
                <title>What has been measured and how have the HDSS databases been constructed?</title>
                <p>The baseline census and a follow-up census were conducted in 2010 and 2017 respectively. We recorded all the demographic data about vital events, migration patterns, socioeconomic status, knowledge, attitude and practices regarding micronutrients, reproductive history of selected pregnant/lactating women, knowledge, attitude and practices for family planning methods and unmet need of family planning, infant and young child feeding status, childhood morbidities, immunization status of children under 2 years, household food insecurity- food consumption and diet diversity, and hygiene practices and health care utilization of health centers. The tools for these modules were adopted from the UNICEF Multiple Indicator Cluster Survey
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>. The main demographic characteristics for the year 2017 are summarized in 
                    <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>.</p>
                <table-wrap id="T1" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                    <label>Table 1. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System profile (2017).</title>
                    </caption>
                    <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                        <thead>
                            <tr>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Indicators</th>
                                <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2017</th>
                            </tr>
                        </thead>
                        <tbody>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total population, N</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">302944</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total Area</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">19</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total Structures</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">42 565</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total Households</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">50245</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Population Density / Sq Km</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">16317</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total Male, n (%)</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">155622 (51%)</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total Female, n (%)</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">147322 (49%)</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Total population 15-49 years (Females)</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">76580 (25%)</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Children &lt; 5 year by, n (%)</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">41405 (14%)</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Annual pregnancies</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">9560</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Annual live births</td>
                                <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">8731</td>
                            </tr>
                        </tbody>
                    </table>
                </table-wrap>
                <p>At each two monthly re-enumeration, CHWs move through the area using GIS-derived maps and collect/update the information on each household member. During the rounds, pregnant women are identified, registered, and followed. Their date of Last Menstrual Period (LPM) is recorded and in case any women is in doubt about her pregnancy, a pregnancy strip test is offered for screening. In the subsequent follow-up visits, counselling on birth preparedness is done and the date and time of birth, mode and place of delivery are recorded. In addition, the CHWs enquire about any birth event that has occurred in the household for all registered women, with a particular focus on women aged 15&#x2013;49 years. Similarly, information on death including date, time, place, and the cause of death among all registered members are recorded. However verbal autopsies are conducted for deaths among children under 5 years of age and deaths among women of reproductive ages using the WHO Verbal Autopsy (VA) 2012 tools
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>&#x2013;
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-19">19</xref>
                    </sup>. VA for stillbirths were discontinued by the end of 2016. The cause of death assignment was done by trained physician using the ICD principles adapted from the revised WHO Verbal Autopsy Coding Standards
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-20">20</xref>
                    </sup>.  </p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Database</title>
            <p>The data was entered and stored in a relational database with event-based programming developed using Microsoft Access 2010. A series of data quality checks were in-built to identify the inconsistencies and errors in data collection. It consisted of data entry screens, data edit and update screens, customized reports generation and data cleaning modules. A backup was also created. Routine error reports were generated during the round and at the end of surveillance round and discussed with the site supervisor and coordinators by the data manager. All data queries were resolved before the end of a surveillance round. Clean data was encrypted and archived in a server at the Aga Khan University, Karachi Pakistan. </p>
            <p>With the availability of newer technology, we had a transition from paper-based data collection to data collection on tablets/smartphones in 2017. Android mobile apps are developed for remote data collection. The data is stored in coded values in MySQL database hosted on a local machine inside Aga Khan University. All the data is synchronized and updated on the server daily. </p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Key findings and publications</title>
            <p>The main demographic indicators across a period of six years have been represented in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>. There has been a decline in overall mortality rates. In the year 2017, these sites had a Crude birth rate (CBR) of 28.8, maternal mortality ratio (MMR) of 252 per 100,000 live births, neonatal mortality rate (NMR) of 42.6, Infant mortality rate (IMR) of 60.1 and under-five mortality (U5MR) of 69.5 per 1000 live births and stillbirth rate (SBR) of 32.4 per 1000 births. We recorded more in-migrations than out-migration at the surveillance sites (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>).</p>
            <table-wrap id="T2" orientation="portrait" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Health &amp; Demographic Surveillance indicators and Trends by Year.</title>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Indicators (Rate/Ratios)</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2012</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2013</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2014</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2015</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2016</th>
                            <th align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2017</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Crude birth rate (CBR) per 1000 population</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">29.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">27.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">26</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">28.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">25.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">28.8</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Maternal mortality ratio (MMR) / 100 000 Live births</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">426.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">361</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">427</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">373.6</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">336.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">252</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Neonatal mortality rate (NMR) per 1000 live births</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">44.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">51</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">42.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">37</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">39.5</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">42.6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Infant mortality rate (IMR) per 1000 live births</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">66.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">77</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">65.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">58</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">62.5</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">60.1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Under-five mortality rate (U5MR) per 1000 live births</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">78.5</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">89</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">77.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">70.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">76.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">69.5</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Stillbirth rate(SBR) / 1000 Births</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">26.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">33</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">34.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">27</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">30.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">32.4</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Abortion rate / 1000 among women aged 15-49 years</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">5</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">5.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">4</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">6.1</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">5.1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Pregnancy rate / 1000 among women aged 15-49 Years</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">186.6</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">163.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">157</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">183.4</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">185.6</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">122.9*</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">General fertility rate (GFR) / 1000 among women aged 15-49 Years</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">119.6</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">109.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">104</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">114.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">100.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">114</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Child-woman ratio</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">707</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">683</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">629</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">608</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">548</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">541</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">In-migration / 1000 Midyear Population</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">54.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">44.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">33.7</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">21.1</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">25</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">3.6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Out-migration /1000 Midyear Population</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">20</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">13.5</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">6.4</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">3.9</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">2.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">1.9</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1">Crude net migration rate</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">34.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">30.8</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">27.3</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">17.1</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">22.2</td>
                            <td align="center" colspan="1" rowspan="1">1.7</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref> describes the trends in child mortality from 2012 to 2017. Under-5 mortality rates (U5MR) peaked in 2013 and 2016 due to the measles epidemic. Within the time period of six years, a reduction in neonatal mortality rates was observed. (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref> and 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref>).</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f3" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 3. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Child Mortality Rates from 2012&#x2013;2017, U5MR, under-five mortality rate; IMR, infant mortality rate; NMR, neonatal mortality rate.</title>
                </caption>
                <graphic orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://gatesopenresearch-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/15209/1f82264c-9b3a-4fab-ba48-eda2c0586040_figure3.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <p>Several studies conducted in the KMCHSS have led the efforts to aid policy makers in making important decisions. One of these studies was the young infant clinical signs study (YICSS), which led to the formulation of WHO seven sign algorithm for detection of possible serious bacterial infection (PSBI) in young infants. This algorithm was then incorporated into the Integrated Management of Childhood Illness (IMCI) and is in use to date
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-21">21</xref>
                </sup>. A randomized control trial (RCT) compared procaine-penicillin and gentamicin, ceftriaxone and trimethoprim-sulfamethoxazole (TMP-SMX) regimens for the treatment of newborns, aged 0 to 59 days, with PSBI in an outpatient setting when hospitalization is declined. TMP-SMX showed the highest failure rate and case fatalities. Procaine penicillin-gentamicin turned out to be the most cost-effective route to treat these bacterial infections
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>
                </sup>. As a follow up to this trial, a randomized control open-label equivalence trial (SATT) in young infants with clinically diagnosed severe infections (CSI), seen at PHC, was done. The trial aimed to evaluate if (1) IM gentamicin once daily (OD) and oral amoxicillin twice daily (BD) for 7 days; and (2) IM penicillin and gentamicin OD for two days followed by oral amoxicillin BD for five days are equivalent to seven days of (3) IM procaine penicillin and gentamicin (reference therapy). The primary outcome of this trial was treatment failure (death, deterioration, or lack of improvement) within seven days of enrollment. Treatment failure rate were equivalent across three regimens. These findings were subsequently incorporated in the WHO guidelines for the management of young infants with CSI, and IM gentamicin OD and oral amoxicillin BD for 7 days was chosen as the treatment of choice
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-5">5</xref>
                </sup>. A study, Global Enteric Multicenter Study (GEMS), exploring etiology of moderate to severe diarrhea (MSD), using quantitative molecular diagnostic methods showed 
                <italic toggle="yes">Shigella</italic> spp, Rotavirus, Adenovirus 40/41, ST-ETEC, 
                <italic toggle="yes">Cryptosporidium</italic> spp, and 
                <italic toggle="yes">Campylobacter</italic> spp are responsible for 77.8% of all diarrheal causes
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                </sup>. In another study, health seeking behavior for sick young infants was studied. The acceptance rate of hospitalized care was found to be 24%. Reasons for high refusal rate included financial difficulties, elders denying permission, and some based their decisions on religious and cultural beliefs. The acceptance of hospitalization was higher when the mother recognized the severity of the illness, presence of grunting, temperature &lt;35.5&#x00b0;C and absence of language barrier at the local hospital. Gender was not a determining factor in decision making. This information forms learning points for interventions promoting health seeking behavior and formulation of alternative community based management plans for the betterment of child survival
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>. An RCT aimed to compare immunization coverage by administering pictorial messages promoting vaccines to mothers versus administering general health promotion messages to the control group. An improvement of 39% in the completion of DPT-3/Hepatitis B vaccines, which shows that simple health awareness interventions can go a long way in raising the health status of low-income communities
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>A randomized double blinded placebo-controlled equivalence trial was conducted in primary care settings, which aimed to determine optimal management of isolated fast breathing in young infants. The primary objective of the study was to evaluate if out-patient therapy of seven days of oral amoxicillin (reference therapy) is equivalent to the placebo. The primary outcome was to see the treatment failure by evaluation of hypoxia, organ failure, anaphylaxis, or hospitalization after treatment initiation. Amoxicillin treatment regimen was found to be more effective than placebo with risk difference of 3.1, p=0.04 (95% CI 0.3, 5.8)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-22">22</xref>
                </sup>. A cohort study on calculating the neonatal mortality within 24 hours of birth was conducted in the rural areas of six countries, including the KHDSS in Pakistan. The neonatal mortality rates were higher than the published model-based estimates for these countries. Around one third of the deaths occurred during first six hours after birth and a little under half of all neonatal deaths within 24 hours. The study concluded that implementing high quality obstetric and newborn care is a priority for preventing newborn deaths early on
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-23">23</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>A randomized control trial (RCT) was conducted to see the immunogenicity of poliovirus vaccines in chronically malnourished infants. Infants were randomized to receive one dose of either bivalent oral poliovirus vaccine (bOPV) alone or in combination with inactivated poliovirus vaccine (IPV). The results showed that those who were given bOPV+IPV together showed to close the immunity gap more than those who were given bOPV alone
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-24">24</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>A prospective cohort study in community-based research sites in south Asia and sub-Saharan Africa, between July 2012, and February 2016, we conducted population-based surveillance of women of reproductive age (15&#x2013;49 years) to identify pregnancies, which were followed up to birth and 42 days post-partum. Verbal autopsies were done for deaths of all women of reproductive age, neonatal deaths, and stillbirths. Physicians used standardized methods for cause of death assignment
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                </sup>. This study revealed maternal mortality ratio (MMR) of 460 per 100000 live births, stillbirth rate (SBR) of 37.8 per 1000 births and neonatal mortality rate (NMR) of 50.1 per 1000 live birth. On VA analysis, among maternal deaths obstetric hemorrhage and hypertensive disorders in pregnancy contributed most to pregnancy related deaths, while neonatal deaths among perinatal asphyxia, sever neonatal infections and preterm birth complication and among stillbirths maternal infections, hypertensive disorders and antepartum hemorrhage were major causes of deaths
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                </sup>.   </p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Future analysis plans</title>
            <p>Future analysis plans include analysis of data from the multi-center Aetiology of Neonatal infection in South Asia (ANISA) study
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>
                </sup>. We are also conducting analysis to determine the burden of major maternal morbidities as part of the AMANHI study
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                </sup>. An additional analysis is on simplified methods to determine gestational age at birth by using a combination of physical and neurodevelopmental parameters. Also, as a part of AMANHI, we have established a biorepository of maternal, newborn, and paternal samples, collected at various time points during and after pregnancy. To the best of our knowledge, this is the only population-based biobank in Pakistan and one of the few in the region. Recently, we have secured funding from the Bill &amp; Melinda Gates Foundation to follow the AMANHI bio-bank cohort for up to three years for neurodevelopmental milestones.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Strengths and weaknesses</title>
            <p>In our demographic and surveillance system, all inhabited and uninhabited structures in the area have been mapped and surveyed. Each individual has been assigned a unique ID and surveyed every two months. The GIS coordinates of these structures, allow us to look at the spatial distribution of various maternal and newborn health indicators. Active surveillance of maternal and child health allows for the cohort to be a part of many multicenter studies, conducted with multiple international collaborators. Our long-term presence in the area has helped us establish good rapport with the population resulting in very low refusal rates.</p>
            <p>Currently, the KMCHSS focuses on children under the age of five years and women of reproductive age, however the vital status and migration status of all household members are recorded. In the future, given adequate amount of funding we would like to expand our surveillance to cover these populations as well. With transition to electronic data collection and monitoring, we are aiming to integrate the surveillance system with our health center for electronic health records for better services to the community</p>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="conclusions">
            <title>Conclusions</title>
            <p>All the studies conducted at our surveillance sites aim for improvement of public health policies. The information we derive, aid us in making informed decisions at local, national, and international levels. These sites also play vital roles in training research personnel.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Ethical statement</title>
            <p>Ethical approval for individual studies is obtained from Aga Khan University&#x2019;s Ethical review committee. Written informed consent for publication of the participants&#x2019; details was obtained from the participants/parents/guardian/relative of the participant.</p>
        </sec>
    </body>
    <back>
        <sec sec-type="data-availability">
            <title>Data availability</title>
            <p>The data collected by KMCHSS is not open source. De-identified data can be shared with other investigators upon request. Collaborative research projects are highly encouraged. Data sharing with other surveillance systems provides an opportunity to learn and understand geological differences. Data requests, enquiries and queries can be sent to Muhammad Imran Nisar (
                <email xlink:href="mailto:imran.nisar@aku.edu">imran.nisar@aku.edu</email>).</p>
        </sec>
        <ack>
            <title>Acknowledgements</title>
            <p>Benazir Balouch Muhammad Sajid, Najeeb Rehman, Saima Jamal, Nasira Hina, Rehana Bashir, Saima Jameel, Taj Muhammad, Fakhra Parveen, Lubna Aziz, Gul Froze, Fatima Ali, Aftab Zaidi, Asghar Ali, Salim Charania, Shukurullah Baig, Muhammad Siddique, Asad Khowaja, Faraz Hussain, Mir Hakim, Azhar Abbas, Ahmed Ali.</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 2</article-title>
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                        <surname>Perry</surname>
                        <given-names>Henry B</given-names>
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                    <label>1</label>Department of International Health, Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health, Baltimore, MD, USA</aff>
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                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                <month>9</month>
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                <bold>General comments:</bold> 
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                        <p>This article was first published in January 2018 and now, a full 5 years later, a revision has been provided. Why the delay? Surprisingly, the paper is still in need of further revision. I suggest the authors respond to my comments in a third revision and also consider a separate article that responds specifically to the need to provide further information about the surveillance system, its findings, and its contributions to Pakistan and to the health of the local population within the surveillance system.</p>
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                        <p>In addition to describing the Karachi Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (KMCHSS), the article describes in great detail the findings of a number of important research studies that were carried out in its field sites. However, the authors state that the KMCHSS was established to &#x201c;influence decision-making and planning for health strategies local, national and international levels&#x2026;&#x201d; (p. 3). The authors fail to describe how the KMCHSS achieved any of these goals at the local and national levels. Their focus in their paper is exclusively on how the findings from the research aided the formulation of policies of UNICEF and WHO, which is important of course. But the following questions remain unanswered: (1) Did the population that participated in the KMCHSS receive any benefits from the findings obtained from the surveillance system? (2) Did the findings from the surveillance system have any influence on national policies, practices or programs? (3) Did the work of the CHWs of the KMCHSS itself have any beneficial effects on the health of mothers and children in the surveillance area?</p>
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                    <list-item>
                        <p>The authors on p. 4 state that each site in the KMCHSS had a primary health care center operated by the department of pediatrics and child health. It would be nice to know a bit more about the services provided there. It would also be nice to know a bit more about the government health services within the KMCHSS.</p>
                    </list-item>
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                        <p>The data are collected by trained community health workers (p. 4). Do these CHWs carry out any other activities beyond data collection? If so, what are they and how are they connected to the PHC centers operated by the university? If not, why are they called CHWs instead of field research officers?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>There is no mention of coverage levels of basic services in the surveillance area &#x2013; immunization coverage, contraceptive prevalence rate, and other basic MCH indicators that are included in the UNICEF Multiple Indicator Cluster survey that were collected according to the information obtained on p. 5.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>There is no mention at all of the primary health care management system established by the Department of Community Health Sciences at Aka Khan University in 1987 and reported in the extraordinary article by Husein
                            <italic> et al.</italic> in 1993 (Husein 
                            <italic>et al.</italic>, 1993
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-34813-1">1</xref>
                            </sup>). This in fact was a demographic and surveillance system set up within a primary health care program in five squatter (slum) communities around Karachi, Pakistan. What happened to this surveillance system, and what relationship does (or did) it have with the MCH surveillance system in periruban Karachi described in this article? The current article mentions that this system was established in rudimentary form by the Department of Pediatric and Child Health at the Aga Khan University in 1993 but makes no mention of the earlier work by the Department of Community Health Sciences.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The authors do not respond in their revised paper to one of the previous reviewer&#x2019;s comments related to the fact that the surveillance system collected data from only married women aged 15-49, with the likelihood of obtained biased results. And they do not respond to the question raised by the same reviewer regarding whether the children of unmarried women were included in the data collected by CHWs.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Are there plans to expand the surveillance system to include non-communicable diseases?</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Specific comments:</bold> 
                <list list-type="order">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>In Table 1, commas should be added to separate thousands.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Reference 1 supports a statement that says that in 2050 90% of the world&#x2019;s urban population will be concentrated in developing countries, yet the reference to support this statement is a profile of the Dar Es Salaam Health and Demographic Surveillance System. This is not an appropriate reference.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>All of the data in Table 2 should be reported with one decimal place.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The in- and out-migration rates reported in Table 2 show dramatic fluctuations from year to year. Why was that?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The data and Figure 3 are the same as in Table 2. Is this repetition necessary?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>There are typos on p. 6 &#x2013; Crude birth rate and Infant mortality rate (these should not be capitalized).</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>On p. 8, first paragraph, the word &#x201c;severe&#x201d; is misspelled. Also in the same sentence there is an error in wording: &#x201c;&#x2026;while neonatal deaths among perinatal asphyxia &#x2026;&#x201d;.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Some of the references are still incomplete (refs. 2 and 16).</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>One of the earlier reviewers asked why there was no attempt to look at the influence of income on health status. The response was that since the surveillance system was in a low-income area, they were not able to explore the influence of income and education. This is simply not true. Of course, even though this is a low-income area, there was undoubtedly some variability in household income and education and exploring the effect of these factors on demographic and health outcomes would have been possible.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>No source data required</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Community health, primary health care. community health workers, monitoring and evaluation</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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        <back>
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                <title>References</title>
                <ref id="rep-ref-34813-1">
                    <label>1</label>
                    <mixed-citation publication-type="journal">
                        <person-group person-group-type="author"/>:
                        <article-title>Developing a primary health care management information system that supports the pursuit of equity, effectiveness and affordability.</article-title>
                        <source>
                            <italic>Soc Sci Med</italic>
                        </source>.<year>1993</year>;<volume>36</volume>(<issue>5</issue>) :
                        <elocation-id>10.1016/0277-9536(93)90055-9</elocation-id>
                        <fpage>585</fpage>-<lpage>96</lpage>
                        <pub-id pub-id-type="pmid">8456328</pub-id>
                        <pub-id pub-id-type="doi">10.1016/0277-9536(93)90055-9</pub-id>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Phillips</surname>
                        <given-names>James F.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r26203a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
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                <aff id="r26203a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Population and Family Health, Columbia University, New York, NY, USA</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
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                <day>26</day>
                <month>2</month>
                <year>2018</year>
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            <p>This narrative alerts the reader to an important demographic monitoring activity in Karachi, Pakistan. Results that are reported are of considerable value, as no comparable data exist for an urban Pakistani population.&#x00a0; &#x00a0;&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> As a report on a demographic surveillance system, the paper is seriously deficient. Internationally known citations on DSS systems are not cited. The data capture procedure is unexplained, except with a sentence noting that the procedure is paper based. Far less expensive and less complicated procedures are available that are tablet based, with core software that is accessible without cost. The rationale for the utilization of obsolete and undoubtedly costly procedures is not explained. What is the software platform for this system? Was the software developed de novo? Or is this system adapted from applications that are functioning elsewhere?</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Basic design features of the HDSS system are left unexplained. The most challenging problem confronting urban longitudinal research concerns urban mobility. How is migration monitored? If migration is not monitored, how is the population at risk of events determined? What is the visitation cycle? The reader assumes that the data are stored as a relational database, but most HDSS systems define data structure by social units. This article refers to buildings as if facilities are the organizing unit for data management. This would be an unconventional procedure that merits explanation.&#x00a0; &#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Beyond alerting the reader to the existence of the system and its size and output, little in this article explains how the system is designed and what urban surveillance systems elsewhere could learn from this important example.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>No source data required</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Demography</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to state that I do not consider it to be of an acceptable scientific standard, for reasons outlined above.</p>
        </body>
        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment3566-26203">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Nisar</surname>
                            <given-names>Muhammad Imran</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Department of Pediatrics , Aga Khan University, Pakistan</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>None</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>25</day>
                    <month>8</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
                </pub-date>
            </front-stub>
            <body>
                <p>This narrative alerts the reader to an important demographic monitoring activity in Karachi, Pakistan. Results that are reported are of considerable value, as no comparable data exist for an urban Pakistani population.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: Thank you for the positive feedback.</underline>
                </p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> As a report on a demographic surveillance system, the paper is seriously deficient. Internationally known citations on DSS systems are not cited. The data capture procedure is unexplained, except with a sentence noting that the procedure is paper based. Far less expensive and less complicated procedures are available that are tablet based, with core software that is accessible without cost. The rationale for the utilization of obsolete and undoubtedly costly procedures is not explained. What is the software platform for this system? Was the software developed de novo? Or is this system adapted from applications that are functioning elsewhere?</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Basic design features of the HDSS system are left unexplained. The most challenging problem confronting urban longitudinal research concerns urban mobility. How is migration monitored? If migration is not monitored, how is the population at risk of events determined? What is the visitation cycle? The reader assumes that the data are stored as a relational database, but most HDSS systems define data structure by social units. This article refers to buildings as if facilities are the organizing unit for data management. This would be an unconventional procedure that merits explanation.&#x00a0;</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Beyond alerting the reader to the existence of the system and its size and output, little in this article explains how the system is designed and what urban surveillance systems elsewhere could learn from this important example.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response:</underline> We have now revised the article to better describe the profile of a Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS) and not the complete HDSS. We have elaborated on various key points such as the data collection process, database management and the structure of the MCHSS for better clarity. In 2017, the from paper-based methods were replaced by the tablet/smartphone-based collection of data. Data on migration has been added in the key findings section.</p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
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    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report26186">
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.21956/gatesopenres.13848.r26186</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Byass</surname>
                        <given-names>Peter</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r26186a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5474-4361</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r26186a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Public Health and Clinical Medicine, Ume&#x00e5; University, Ume&#x00e5;, Sweden</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>6</day>
                <month>2</month>
                <year>2018</year>
            </pub-date>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2018 Byass P</copyright-statement>
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            <p>This is an interesting description of a surveillance operation on married women aged 15-49 and children under 5 years of age. However, such a limited surveillance operation cannot be described as a "Health and Demographic Surveillance System" - which should cover an entire defined population - and as such the title of the article is misleading. Furthermore, although this is described as a "Research Article", this is not the case - there is no research hypothesis, evaluation, or evidence-based conclusions. It is in fact a useful description of an on-going field operation, but that does not consitute a scientifically sound research article.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Some of the details are also questionable. The selection of only married women aged 15-49 will introduce severe bias in terms of some important outcomes like teenage pregnancy, abortion (natural or induced, legal or illegal). It is also not clear whether it is only the under-5 children of these married women who are included - which is another potential source of bias, since it is likely that children of unmarried women or mothers under 15 years of age would experience different risks.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>population health; health and demographic surveillance systems</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to state that I do not consider it to be of an acceptable scientific standard, for reasons outlined above.</p>
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        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment3565-26186">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Nisar</surname>
                            <given-names>Muhammad Imran</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Department of Pediatrics , Aga Khan University, Pakistan</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>None</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>25</day>
                    <month>8</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
                </pub-date>
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            <body>
                <p>This is an interesting description of a surveillance operation on married women aged 15-49 and children under 5 years of age. However, such a limited surveillance operation cannot be described as a "Health and Demographic Surveillance System" - which should cover an entire defined population - and as such the title of the article is misleading. Furthermore, although this is described as a "Research Article", this is not the case - there is no research hypothesis, evaluation, or evidence-based conclusions. It is in fact a useful description of an on-going field operation, but that does not constitute a scientifically sound research article.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>We agree with the reviewer and have revised the article to better describe the Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS) and not the complete HDSS. We have structured the article as a profile of the Karachi MCHSS.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Some of the details are also questionable. The selection of only married women aged 15-49 will introduce severe bias in terms of some important outcomes like teenage pregnancy, abortion (natural or induced, legal or illegal). It is also not clear whether it is only the under-5 children of these married women who are included - which is another potential source of bias, since it is likely that children of unmarried women or mothers under 15 years of age would experience different risks.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>The reviewer has raised an important here. While it is important to assess pregnancy outcomes in unmarried mothers, in Pakistan there exists a strong cultural taboo against pregnancies in certain groups, notably unmarried women which makes it difficult to document these events.</p>
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        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.21956/gatesopenres.13848.r26213</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Reidpath</surname>
                        <given-names>Daniel D.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r26213a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-8796-0420</uri>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Thoo</surname>
                        <given-names>Hyi-Yenn</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r26213a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Co-referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r26213a1">
                    <label>1</label>Jeffrey Cheah School of Medicine and Health Sciences, Monash University Malaysia, Selangor, Malaysia</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>29</day>
                <month>1</month>
                <year>2018</year>
            </pub-date>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2018 Reidpath DD and Thoo HY</copyright-statement>
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            <p>The manuscript by Ilyas and colleagues describes an interesting and important study site in four (nearly) contiguous communities in peri-urban Karachi, Pakistan. The authors also provided examples of various research projects attributed to the success of the surveillance system&#x2019;s collection of data. The community of scholars working in cognate areas will be interested in, and derive benefit from, learning about their work.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Major comments</bold>
            </p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> However, and the &#x201c;however&#x201d; is significant, the research described in the manuscript does not conform to a Health and Demographic Surveillance System (HDSS). It would be better described as a Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS). Frankly, this is an important innovation and should not be dismissed simply because it is not a HDSS. An HDSS follows whole of population, whereas the Agha Khan site follows &#x201c;only married women of child bearing age (15 to 49 years) and children under the age of five...&#x201d; (p.4) The exclusion of 
                <bold>unmarried</bold> women is interesting, as is the under 5 cut-off.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> It is noteworthy that, notwithstanding a rich and growing literature about HDSS, there is little reference made to that literature. The article by Ye et al. (2012) provides a good overview.(
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2458-12-741">https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2458-12-741</ext-link>)</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> A further issue is the commencement date of the surveillance system. The 
                <underline>Introduction</underline> (p.3) places the commencement in 2003, but the census was only completed in 2010 (
                <underline>Outputs of the HDSS</underline> p.4).</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> There is no statement about the response rate, whether it is constant, or declining, and mechanisms for maintaining the cohorts participation.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Additional comments</bold>
            </p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Abstract</underline>
            </p>
            <p> A good, brief description of the MCHSS&#x2019;s profile in Karachi was given by the authors - the nature of MCHSS&#x2019;s establishment (year of set up, area of coverage, recorded data, purpose of the system) was clearly stated &#x2013; with the exception of the confusion around the commencement date. The mentioned list of research projects following the utilisation of collected data highlights the significance of the MCHSS as a research-facilitating platform in Karachi.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Introduction</underline>
            </p>
            <p> Authors could consider signposting the flow of the manuscript in a clearer way, according to the flow of the contents.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> A good, general context of reasons for HDSS&#x2019;s set up was given, as well as the description of its geographical positioning of sites within Karachi. However, statements ended vaguely, in terms of the authors&#x2019; elaboration of the respective communities. Moreover, there was a lack of information detailing reasons of the system&#x2019;s set up in peri-urban areas and specifically in low income communities.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The authors&#x2019; explanation and description of surveillance structures could be structured better.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Inclusion and exclusion criteria of selected subjects were rather scattered throughout the article. Mothers and infants appear in one place. The enumeration of men in another. This brings back the previous point on better structuring of content. Terms on in/out migration were also lacking &#x2013; did the surveillance system follow mothers and under 5&#x2019;s or everyone?</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Outputs of the HDSS and Discussion</underline>
            </p>
            <p> The authors mentioned socioeconomic factors, without elaboration. What were the factors? This comes back to the earlier point made regarding the reasons of the HDSS&#x2019;s set up in low income communities in areas of Karachi. What about higher income households in these peri-urban areas?</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> In addition, the authors could generate a summarized table of information used during surveillance.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> It also seemed that the future research projects were given more focus in this article, as opposed to the key findings of the HDSS as is. While not strictly necessary for a profile paper, the results or trends found through the HDSS could be expanded further by explaining and discussing the relationship between documented socio-demographic data and collected health information of the respective communities in Karachi.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <underline>Data availability</underline>
            </p>
            <p> While not a criticism of the Manuscript, rather an observation about the governance, it would be good it a more formalised description of data sharing could be referenced.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 
                <bold>Grammatical notes</bold>
            </p>
            <p> The article should be proof read and corrected prior to publication. There are a few noticeable grammatical and typographical errors.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Epidemiology, demographic surveillance, population health measurement, equity, social determinants of health</p>
            <p>We confirm that we have read this submission and believe that we have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however we have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                        <name>
                            <surname>Nisar</surname>
                            <given-names>Muhammad Imran</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Department of Pediatrics , Aga Khan University, Pakistan</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>None</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>25</day>
                    <month>8</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
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                <p>The manuscript by Ilyas and colleagues describes an interesting and important study site in four (nearly) contiguous communities in peri-urban Karachi, Pakistan. The authors also provided examples of various research projects attributed to the success of the surveillance system&#x2019;s collection of data. The community of scholars working in cognate areas will be interested in, and derive benefit from, learning about their work.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response:</underline> We thank the reviewer for the constructive feedback.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <bold>Major comments</bold>
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                <p> </p>
                <p> However, and the &#x201c;however&#x201d; is significant, the research described in the manuscript does not conform to a Health and Demographic Surveillance System (HDSS). It would be better described as a Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS). Frankly, this is an important innovation and should not be dismissed simply because it is not a HDSS. An HDSS follows whole of population, whereas the Agha Khan site follows &#x201c;only married women of child-bearing age (15 to 49 years) and children under the age of five...&#x201d; (p.4) The exclusion of&#x00a0;
                    <bold>unmarried</bold>&#x00a0;women is interesting, as is the under 5 cut-offs.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> It is noteworthy that, notwithstanding a rich and growing literature about HDSS, there is little reference made to that literature. The article by Ye et al. (2012) provides a good overview.(
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2458-12-741">https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2458-12-741</ext-link>)</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>We agree with the reviewer and have revised the article to better describe the Maternal and Child Health Surveillance System (MCHSS) and not the complete HDSS. Unmarried women are excluded from pregnancy surveillance as it is not culturally acceptable to enquire about pregnancy status in unmarried women.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> A further issue is the commencement date of the surveillance system. The&#x00a0;
                    <underline>Introduction</underline>&#x00a0;(p.3) places the commencement in 2003, but the census was only completed in 2010 (
                    <underline>Outputs of the HDSS</underline>&#x00a0;p.4).</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>The KMCHSS was established stepwise. It was initiated in 2003 in four peri-urban areas with focus on providing a platform to various studies. In 2010 the area was geo mapped and first census was conducted. In 2014 it was extended to one more area where the census was conducted in 2014. The most recent census was conducted in 2017.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> There is no statement about the response rate, whether it is constant, or declining, and mechanisms for maintaining the cohorts participation.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>The overall response rate for data collection at the KMCHSS sites was 94%.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <bold>Additional comments</bold>
                </p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Abstract</underline>
                </p>
                <p> A good, brief description of the MCHSS&#x2019;s profile in Karachi was given by the authors - the nature of MCHSS&#x2019;s establishment (year of set up, area of coverage, recorded data, purpose of the system) was clearly stated &#x2013; with the exception of the confusion around the commencement date. The mentioned list of research projects following the utilization of collected data highlights the significance of the MCHSS as a research-facilitating platform in Karachi.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>Thank you for the comment. We apologize for the confusion. The KMCHSS was established stepwise. It was initiated in 2003 in four peri-urban areas with focus on providing a platform to various studies. In 2010 the area was geo-mapped, and first census was conducted. In 2014 it was extended to one more area where the census was conducted in 2014. The most recent census was conducted in 2017.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Introduction</underline>
                </p>
                <p> Authors could consider signposting the flow of the manuscript in a clearer way, according to the flow of the contents.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response:</underline> We have now revised the flow of the manuscript for better clarity.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> A good, general context of reasons for HDSS&#x2019;s set up was given, as well as the description of its geographical positioning of sites within Karachi. However, statements ended vaguely, in terms of the authors&#x2019; elaboration of the respective communities. Moreover, there was a lack of information detailing reasons of the system&#x2019;s set up in peri-urban areas and specifically in low-income communities.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>We have revised the text to describe the communities included in the MCHSS. In Karachi, urban dwellers mostly reside in settlements in peri-urban areas with the highest population density. These peri-urban areas experience a high maternal and childhood mortality. Thus, the MCHSS was set up in these areas.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> The authors&#x2019; explanation and description of surveillance structures could be structured better.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>Thank you for the comment. We have now added a detailed description of the MCHSS structure.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Inclusion and exclusion criteria of selected subjects were rather scattered throughout the article. Mothers and infants appear in one place. The enumeration of men in another. This brings back the previous point on better structuring of content. Terms on in/out migration were also lacking &#x2013; did the surveillance system follow mothers and under 5&#x2019;s or everyone?</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>We apologize again for the confusion. The target population for the MCHSS were only women and children. We have added details on migration under the key findings section.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Outputs of the HDSS and Discussion</underline>
                </p>
                <p> The authors mentioned socioeconomic factors, without elaboration. What were the factors? This comes back to the earlier point made regarding the reasons of the HDSS&#x2019;s set up in low-income communities in areas of Karachi. What about higher income households in these peri-urban areas?</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>These MCHSS was mostly set-up in low-income communities since these populations report the highest maternal and child morbidity and mortality rates. We could not explore factors such as the income, and education of the households. However, food security was assessed.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> In addition, the authors could generate a summarized table of information used during surveillance.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>We have now added a table (Table 1) describing the main demographic characteristics of the MCHSS.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> It also seemed that the future research projects were given more focus in this article, as opposed to the key findings of the HDSS as is. While not strictly necessary for a profile paper, the results or trends found through the HDSS could be expanded further by explaining and discussing the relationship between documented socio-demographic data and collected health information of the respective communities in Karachi.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response: </underline>Thank you. We have now elaborated on the various trends seen among the women and children in the MCHSS.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Data availability</underline>
                </p>
                <p> While not a criticism of the Manuscript, rather an observation about the governance, it would be good if a more formalised description of data sharing could be referenced.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response:</underline> Although the data collected by the MCHSS is not open source. De-identified data can be shared with other investigators upon request.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <bold>Grammatical notes</bold>
                </p>
                <p> The article should be proofread and corrected prior to publication. There are a few noticeable grammatical and typographical errors.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 
                    <underline>Author response:</underline> We have proofread the manuscript to remove any grammatical and typographical errors</p>
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