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 Mobula Linda M. Conceptualization Formal Analysis Investigation Methodology Resources Supervision Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing https://orcid.org/0000-0003-4319-2308 a 1 2 Sarfo Stephen Formal Analysis Methodology Project Administration Resources Supervision Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing https://orcid.org/0000-0001-7274-5093 3 Arthur Lynda Conceptualization Project Administration Resources Supervision Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing 4 Burnham Gilbert Conceptualization Formal Analysis Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing 2 Ansong Daniel Conceptualization Methodology Software Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing 5 Plange-Rhule Jacob Conceptualization Formal Analysis Methodology Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing 6 Ofori-Adjei David Conceptualization Formal Analysis Investigation Methodology Resources Supervision Writing – Original Draft Preparation Writing – Review & Editing https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1912-4188 7 Johns Hopkins School of Medicine, Baltimore, MD, 21205, USA Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health, Baltimore, MD, USA Department of Medicine, Kwame Nkrumah University of Science and Technology, Kumasi, Ghana Ghana Access and Affordability Program, Accra, Ghana Department of Child Health, School of Medical Sciences, Kwame Nkrumah University of Science & Technology, Kumasi, Ghana Ghana College of Physicians and Surgeons, Accra, Ghana Department of Medicine and Therapeutics, School of Medicine & Dentistry, University of Ghana, Accra, Ghana mmobula1@jhmi.edu

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The global burden of non-communicable diseases (NCDs) is growing, and access to prevention and treatment strategies remain limited, especially for those in low- and middle-income countries (LMICs).

Novel approaches are needed to improve access and affordability of medicines that can treat NCDs in LMICs. An integrated approach including differential pricing, health systems strengthening, improved supply chain management and greater affordability can improve access to innovative branded medicines for NCDs.

While differential pricing has several advantages for improving the affordability of NCD medicines in LMICs, it can’t overcome all access barriers as a standalone approach. An integrated approach to health systems strengthening, supply chain management and affordability are needed to overcome key challenges in getting medicines for NCD to patients in LMICs.

The Access and Affordability Initiative (AAI) is a public private partnership aiming to improve access to and availability of essential medicines for the treatment of NCDs and strengthening of health systems. Through this novel initiative a prospective cohort of patients with hypertension and diabetes were followed in Ghana and the Philippines to examine the effect of differential pricing on access to treatment of hypertension and diabetes.

Abbreviations NCDs: non-communicable diseases; LMIC: low- and middle- income country

 Hypertension Diabetes Ghana Differential Pricing LMIC Non-Communicable Diseases Universal Health Coverage Novartis Merck Sharp and Dohme Gates Foundation OPP1055800 Pfizer Gates Foundation [OPP1055800]. Funding for this study was provided by MSD, Novartis, Pfizer, Sanofi (each a Participant Company) and the Gates Foundation (collectively, the Funders) through the New Venture Fund (NVF). The NVF is a not-for-profit organization exempt as a public charity under section 501(c)(3) of the United States Internal Revenue Code of 1986, and assumes financial management of the study as a fiduciary agent and primary contractor for the Funders The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. Introduction Burden of non-communicable diseases

Non-communicable diseases (NCDs), especially cardiovascular diseases, diabetes, and cancer, have emerged as the leading cause of premature deaths globally. Eighty-six per cent of these deaths are estimated to occur in low-and middle-income countries (LMIC), where they pose a serious public health threat 1 . The increase in the prevalence of NCDs is largely due to demographic changes from population growth and ageing. The epidemiologic transition in LMICs, characterized by a growth in the burden of disease from infectious diseases to NCDs, has largely been driven by a number of factors, including the consumption of processed foods high in fat, salt and sugar, a decrease in physical activity with sedentary lifestyles, obesity and a rise in the use of tobacco and alcohol 2 .

 Access and affordability of medicines for NCDs in LMICs

For many patients, the high cost of medicines constitutes a major barrier to access innovative patented medicines, but also to the World Health Organization (WHO) list of essential medicines, 92% of which are off-patent 3 . As the prevention and control of NCDs often requires life-long treatments, novel initiatives, which improve access and affordability, are needed. Health financing reforms and enhanced normative guidance are required for current financing strategies, such as health insurance (with or without co-payment), out-of-pocket expenditure, financing pools and pre-payment, in order to enhance patient access to medicines and overall health outcomes. Essential medicines used to treat NCDs tend to have limited availability and affordability, especially in public sector settings in LMICs, thus negatively impacting control of NCDs 4– 6 . Approximately 90% of individuals in LMICs are estimated to use their own funds to purchase medicines, resulting in out-of-pocket expenditures for medicines being the highest expenditure after food, resulting in challenges with affordability, posing major burdens on government budgets 5 . A significant proportion of morbidity and mortality due to NCDs can be prevented if medicines are made accessible and affordable 6 .

The lack of available data on pharmaceutical expenditure, specifically on the types of medicines procured or sold, public and private sector spending, and the degree of access by key population subgroups was recently highlighted by an article in the Lancet 7 . It recommended that Governments and health systems create and maintain information systems for routine monitoring of data bearing on the affordability of essential medicines, as well as price and availability, in the public and private sectors 7 . The aim of this paper is to discuss differential pricing for the treatment of NCDs, as a financing scheme to help achieve Universal Health Care.

 Health financing: Differential pricing

Differential pricing is one of the approaches to achieve the goal of Universal Health Care (UHC). UHC is defined as the ability to access quality, needed health services, while ensuring that the use of these services does not expose the user to financial hardship. UHC is now a Sustainable Development Goal (SDG) goal: “Achieve UHC, including financial risk protection, access to quality essential health care services and access to safe, effective, quality and affordable essential medicines and vaccines for all.” The concept of UHC ensures a “system-wide effective coverage combined with universal financial protection,” thus avoiding exorbitant out-of-pocket costs 8 . Out-of-pocket financing for chronic disorders poses a real barrier to increasing access to medicines for poor populations 9 .

Differential pricing, an approach used to price medicines based on the purchasing power of payers in different socioeconomic segments, within countries or between countries, has been shown to be beneficial and lead to improvement of access and affordability 10, 11 . Thus far, the use of differential pricing has generally been limited to vaccines, contraceptives, antimalarials and antiretrovirals in the context of the Global Fund and Global Alliance for Vaccine Initiative, where price reductions were achieved through such strategies as high-volume purchasing, reliable and adequate financing, public advocacy, negotiation, and market competition 12, 13 . Some of the challenges in the roll out of differential pricing stand out, as this approach doesn’t completely address non-price barriers to access, such as challenges related to regulation and weak supply chain and health systems. With regards to supply chain challenges, frequent stockouts, inability to forecast accurately, inefficient distribution systems, or leakage of medicines for private resale, can all impact access 9 . Therefore in order to improve access and affordability using differential pricing as a financing scheme, it is important that an integrated approach be utilized which includes robust partnerships between multiple stakeholders (governments, donors, biopharmaceutical companies, UN agencies, non-governmental organizations), as well as targeted efforts to strengthen supply chain and health systems.

 Key international commitments recognize the need for improvement in access and affordability for essential medicines

The WHO Global Action Plan for the Prevention and Control of non-communicable diseases was endorsed by the 66 th World Health Assembly to strengthen national efforts to address the burden of NCDs 1 . The goal of the WHO Global Action Plan is to improve availability of essential medicines in both public and private facilities and reduce premature mortality from non-communicable diseases by 25% by the year 2025 1 . In 2015, NCDs were included in the SDGs, thus recognizing NCDs as a challenge for sustainable development (SDG target number 3).

One of the objectives of the WHO Global Action Plan is to “Implement other cost-effective interventions and policy options to strengthen and orient health systems to address non-communicable diseases and risk factors through people-centered health care and universal health coverage” 13 . Through differential pricing, the cost of medicines in populations with limited access in LMICs can become more affordable and, when coupled with needed health system improvements, has the potential to dramatically increase access to medicines for specific conditions among lower income segments of the population.

These key commitments on the part of the international community are critical in helping achieve improved access for patients living with NCDs in LMICs.

The WHO recently launched the #beatNCDS campaign, which aims to assist countries to achieve nine global voluntary NCD targets to reduce premature deaths from cancers, heart and lung diseases, and diabetes by 25% by 2025. In order to successfully achieve these goals, it is essential that access to medicines be improved by health financing reforms.

 Study: Access and Affordability Initiative

The Access and Affordability Initiative (AAI) is a multilateral collaboration between multiple stakeholders with the aim of improving access to and availability of essential medicines for the treatment of NCDs and strengthening of health systems. It brings together four major biopharmaceutical companies – Merck, Sharp and Dohme Corp. (MSD), a subsidiary of Merck & Co., Inc., Kenilworth, N.J., U.S.A., Novartis, Pfizer and Sanofi – and the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation, who have initiated a public private partnership with the Ministries of Health in Ghana and the Philippines. AAI is one of the initiatives supporting Access Accelerated, a global partnership of a coalition of biopharmaceutical companies to address the barriers to access for NCDs in LMICs. Access Accelerated was launched at the World Economic Forum’s Annual Meeting in Davos by twenty-two leading biopharmaceutical companies to advance access to NCD prevention and care in low and lower-middle income countries 14 .

Through this novel initiative a prospective cohort of patients with hypertension and diabetes were followed in Ghana and the Philippines at multiple sites, allowing these countries, with the support of the Ministry of Health, as well as academic institutions, to study the effect of within-country differential pricing of innovative medicines and health systems strengthening on access to innovative medicines, clinical outcomes, including disease control, complications and adherence, for diabetes and hypertension. Health system strengthening activities included the development of clinical guidelines, training on supply chain and clinical management, strengthening of supply chain management. Each of the participating companies independently and made decisions involving the AAI. The initiative will provide a unique opportunity to determine whether this type of public private collaboration can improve access to affordable medicines in the developing world and thereby help to achieve SDG3. Additional evidence will be needed to determine the generalizability of such an intervention in other LMIC to tackle the issue of access to treatment.

The AAI study will help provide essential data on access to medicines, affordability of treatment, clinical outcomes, as well as out-of-pocket expenditure by rural and urban populations in both Ghana and the Philippines. This information system will be shared with the respective Ministries of Health in both countries and will assist in providing important policy recommendations to these respective Ministries.

 Conclusions

Given the growing cost to the health system of poorly managed NCDs and of the limited availability of financial resources, targeted, cost-effective interventions are needed. Additional evidence will be required to examine the ability to implement differential pricing as a means to improve access to and affordability of medicines for the treatment of NCDs in a variety of contexts. “To explore viable health financing mechanisms and innovative economic tools supported by evidence” is a policy recommendation in the updated WHO Global Action Plan for the Prevention and Control of NCDs 15 .

The AAI presents one example of such an exploration through differential pricing of innovative medicines for the control of NCDs, coupled with health systems strengthening and may reveal an innovative means to improve access to critically needed medicines and thereby help curb the disturbing trends of excess morbidity and mortality from NCDs in LMICs.

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Competing interests: No competing interests were disclosed.

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Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this article describing the Access and Affordability Initiative (AAI), a public-private partnership to improve affordability and availability of medicines for non-communicable diseases (NCD) in Ghana and the Philippines.

I agree with the comments and suggestions made by the first reviewer, particularly those around the need for more details about the initiative and the evaluation methods, to shorten the introduction and provide a concise and critical analysis of the AAI potential impact. I have made some additional suggestions building on these original comments.

Define access and the contribution of the AAI towards improving access to medicines

The initiative is about improving access to medicines so to start with a definition of access and how the AAI is going to be evaluated are needed. You may want to refer to an existing framework for access to medicines and describe which components the AAI aims to address. For example, the 4A framework used by WHO and MSH in 2000 focuses on accessibility, availability, affordability, acceptability, and quality of products and services. Which components does the AAI address, which not?

Differential pricing aims to improve affordability (depending on coverage either for the health system or for the patient) and in this way increase use of medicines. There is a second component in the AAI which aims to address non-financial barriers to access. Issues related to regulation and weak supply chain are mentioned under the differential pricing subchapter. If the AAI has indeed two components, a financial one (differential pricing) and a health system strengthening one (development of clinical guidelines, training on supply chain and clinical management, strengthening of supply chain management), I think the title of this subchapter should be changed to reflect both and in general the article should give equal weight to both components unless one component was dominant in which case this should be specified. 

It would be good to provide more details around the health system strengthening (HSS) interventions and how they are expected to improve access to medicines by acting on one or more of its components. How were these HSS intervention chosen among the many areas of the health systems that could have been strengthened to improve access to medicines (e.g. human resources, health information systems)? A bit of background on the issues hampering access to essential medicines for NCDs in the two countries would help and these challenges could then be linked to the chosen HSS interventions.

Literature on differential pricing and medicines selected for differential pricing

p.3 “Differential pricing, an approach used to price medicines based on the purchasing power of payers in different socioeconomic segments, within countries or between countries, has been shown to be beneficial and lead to improvement of access and affordability 10,11.”

I would suggest also discuss some of the potential challenges with differential pricing which have been discussed in the literature. For example (non-exhaustive list):  

Moon et al. (2011) 1

Williams et al. (2015) 2

p.4 “The Access and Affordability Initiative (AAI) is a multilateral collaboration between multiple stakeholders with the aim of improving access to and availability of essential medicines for the treatment of NCDs and strengthening of health systems.”

When you talk about ‘essential medicines’ do you mean that the medicines selected for differential pricing in these two countries were chosen from either the WHO model essential medicines list (EML) or the national EML in the two countries? Please explain how the medicines which are the focus of the intervention were chosen, particularly the balance between on-patent and generic medicines. In the beginning you mention that 92% of the WHO essential medicines are off-patent. So if the focus is on improving access to essential medicines, one would expect them to be the target for interventions.

Data collection

p. 4 “The AAI study will help provide essential data on access to medicines, affordability of treatment, clinical outcomes, as well as out-of-pocket expenditure by rural and urban populations in both Ghana and the Philippines. This information system will be shared with the respective Ministries of Health in both countries and will assist in providing important policy recommendations to these respective Ministries.”

It would be helpful to know more about what kind of data (i.e. variables) is being collected and how it is being collected (e.g. through existing data collection systems, surveys, etc.). As you rightly mention in the introduction, limited data to study access to medicines is currently available in low- and middle-income countries and to ensure sustainability, data collection systems should be integrated into existing health information systems.

Results

According to https://accessaccelerated.org/initiative/access-and-affordability-initiative/ and http://partnerships.ifpma.org/partnership/access-and-affordability-initiative-aai the studies were due to be completed mid-2017. Can you present some results? Please also provide information on the status of the initiative. When did the interventions start, how long will they last, will there be continuous evaluation? 

Minor comments

You may want to revise the sentence below:

p.3 “Differential pricing is one of the approaches to achieve the goal of Universal Health Care (UHC).”

Differential pricing is an instrument [among many] to increase affordability of medicines, which can contribute to UHC through reduced expenditure and greater access to medicines. [The patient may still need to pay out-of-pocket, the coverage component is not addressed through differential pricing].

p.3 “Through differential pricing, the cost of medicines in populations with limited access in LMICs can become more affordable and, when coupled with needed health system improvements, has the potential to dramatically increase access to medicines for specific conditions among lower income segments of the population.”

Which health system improvements are needed to improve access to medicines?

p.4 “The WHO recently launched the  #beatNCDS campaign, which aims to assist countries to achieve nine global voluntary NCD targets to reduce premature deaths from cancers, heart and lung diseases, and diabetes by 25% by 2025. In order to successfully achieve these goals, it is essential that access to medicines be improved by health financing reforms.”

The AAI tries to improve affordability through differential pricing. A health financing reform goes well beyond. It is about changing the way providers are remunerated, how health services and products are financed, etc. It is not just about pricing. For this reason, I would not conclude with this statement just before introducing the AAI.

p. 4 “Through this novel initiative a prospective cohort of patients with hypertension and diabetes were followed in Ghana and the Philippines at multiple sites, allowing these countries, with the support of the Ministry of Health, as well as academic institutions, to study the effect of within-country differential pricing of innovative medicines and health systems strengthening on access to innovative medicines, clinical outcomes, including disease control, complications and adherence, for diabetes and hypertension.” This is a very long sentence, please break it down.

Please check this sentence: p.4 “Each of the participating companies independently and made decisions involving the AAI.”

Does the article adequately reference differing views and opinions?

Partly

Are all factual statements correct, and are statements and arguments made adequately supported by citations?

Yes

Is the Open Letter written in accessible language?

Partly

Where applicable, are recommendations and next steps explained clearly for others to follow?

Partly

Is the rationale for the Open Letter provided in sufficient detail?

Yes

Reviewer Expertise:

NA

I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.

References : A win-win solution?: A critical analysis of tiered pricing to improve access to medicines in developing countries. Global Health .2011;7: 10.1186/1744-8603-7-39 39 21992405 10.1186/1744-8603-7-39 : Cautionary Notes on a Global Tiered Pricing Framework for Medicines. Am J Public Health .2015;105(7) : 10.2105/AJPH.2015.302554 1290-3 25973806 10.2105/AJPH.2015.302554 10.21956/gatesopenres.13859.r26268 Reviewer response for version 1 Heller David J. 1 Referee Arnhold Institute for Global Health, Department of Medicine/Health System Design & Global Health, Icahn School of Medicine at Mount Sinai, New York, NY, USA

Competing interests: I am a friend and colleague of Dr. Linda Meta Mobula, though we have not formally collaborated on any research to date.

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This article is a welcome addition to the under-studied field of non-communicable disease (NCD) policy. It both outlines several solutions to the problem of NCD medication access, and describes an example organization working in this domain. However, I feel the article would benefit from some revisions for clarity - and some additional details - to make its argument more cohesive and stronger. Additionally, the article makes heavy use of passive voice (e.g., "a prospective cohort...were followed in Ghana and the Philippines"), creating a tone that I think undercuts the force of its argument. See details below - I would be happy to review a revised version as well. 

Abstract: the authors spend the first 4 of 6 sentences in this paragraph outline the problems the article addresses - only after that introduction does the reader hear about the Access and Affordability Initiative as a solution. Reworking the abstract to start with a summary statement describing the AAI, and the article's thesis about its role, would help focus the reader's attention. For example, the abstract could start with a statement to the effect of "NCDs are a growing problem in LMICs, and there are too few medicines available/accessible there to treat vulnerable patients. Here we describe a novel initiative - the AAI - and argue it can/should be used to tackle this access issue, through diverse strategies such as differential pricing, supply chain management," etc. 

Introduction: in my view this section, like the abstract, introduces the problem in more detail than is necessary, but doesn't introduce the solution. Given the article is brief, I would suggest keeping the background to only 2-4 sentences, in one paragraph, outlining why NCD treatments in LMICs matter: a) because NCDs are a leading and rising cause of death *and* disability in LMIC (would cite references for both); b) many of these deaths are premature and preventable; c) many occur in the lowest-income persons in LMICs (would cite refs for this, such as DiCesare et al, Lancet 2013, or Vellakkal et al, Plos One 2013) and d) the medicines to treat NCDs are often absent. Then, the section can describe the AAI (as is currently listed under "Study" on page 2) as an answer to these problems. As appropriate, the authors could then describe in 1-2 sentences how the AAI addresses (or does not yet address) the main components of medication access in the body of the paper: differential pricing, health system strengthening, etc. 

In the body of the paper, I think the reader would benefit from hearing about AAI in more detail than is currently provided. For example, how exactly does AAI support Access Accelerated? Who precisely are the cohort with hypertension/diabetes AAI is following in Ghana and the Philippines? How will the authors measure AAI's impact on the supply chain, medication prices, etc.?

After detailing the AAI's approach, the authors could then transition to all the potential benefits of AAI in more detail: for example, explaining how differential pricing improved access to antiretrovirals for HIV (perhaps providing more details on its precise impact if available), then discussing how AAI is trying to achieve this goal. The authors could also provide details on other strategies to boost medication access in turn, such as tackling supply chain barriers (see work by Prashant Yadav for example); political advocacy in support of NCD medication access (see Sandeep Kishore's work for example); and then outline how AAI may or may not help promote NCD medication access along those lines. 

Conclusion: the article could finish with next steps for how the NCD community can leverage/build on/expand AAI - based on what it does or does not achieve in the domains above - to address any of the above avenues that AAI doesn't yet cover.  This approach would help the reader see how their own work can bolster the work AAI is currently doing.

In summary, I think the article is a promising letter that highlights a potentially important new initiative for an under-studied problem. However, with a tighter introduction; more details on the AAI concept; and a more concise analysis of AAI's potential for impact, it could be far more impactful. I thank the journal for the opportunity to review this piece.

Does the article adequately reference differing views and opinions?

Yes

Are all factual statements correct, and are statements and arguments made adequately supported by citations?

Yes

Is the Open Letter written in accessible language?

Partly

Where applicable, are recommendations and next steps explained clearly for others to follow?

Partly

Is the rationale for the Open Letter provided in sufficient detail?

Yes

Reviewer Expertise:

Implementation science approaches to strengthen non-communicable disease care delivery

I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.